Reviews for Untested
AuthorsPenDragon chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Good so far
Kitala chapter 21 . 6/25/2009
Yay for updates. Adriana's cry was bound to happen sooner rather than later, really P
Andreille LeFlore chapter 21 . 6/22/2009

That was excellent! I loved it! Dracula made me laugh this time around. He just seemed so childish. I feel bad for Ria, though. Why can't we all just get along? Haha! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dionysis chapter 21 . 6/21/2009
Ye! Sparks flying between Sara and Drac! She's a little terrifying right now, to be honest lol. And I honestly hope Ria calms down soon or she's going to get in a heap of trouble that Isaac or some other poor schmuck is gonna have pull her out of. And the idea of a bloodbond...sounds interesting. You gonna go into more detail in the next chapter? Hope so. Very well written, and as I've said before, can't wait for the next chapter! 3
DezoPenguin chapter 20 . 6/20/2009
And things are rapidly picking up. Have to say that I saw the reveal coming (see my review for chapter 11 where I noted "Alucard" in quotes...) but it was still effective because of how you conveyed Ria's surprise and offense. I'm a bit surprised that Sara didn't recognize Matthias (or for that matter Dracula, since she's fought him as Drac any number of times)...but he's changed a lot since becoming "Count Dracula" and he's certainly sneaky enough to take that sort of thing into consideration when employing glamours to conceal his identity...

I like Isaac's mental juggling act a lot. Since his loyalty is being enforced by compulsion, it's not surprising that he'd be able to find loopholes; it's a neat touch. I find it interesting that Ria is more angry at Isaac for not telling her about Dracula's deception than at Dracula for actually doing the deceiving (even though if Isaac HAD told her, it would immediately have destroyed her perception of "Alucard" and meant that Walter's magic would make Isaac immediately betray them). I can only think that the emotional/romantic tension between Ria and Isaac from earlier chapters is bearing fruit; she actually *cares* about her relationship with him while Dracula is...well, Dracula.

And now, we've got a big four-way implosion coming up with Isaac, Olrox, Walter, and Dracula, with Ria being completely out of everybody else's league, power-wise. I can only hope that she's able to pick her spots and take decisive action at the right time, or everybody's going to be in a world of hurt...

Keep it up, and in the two words most seen in reviews...update soon!
Lemonadder chapter 20 . 6/16/2009
Have I mentioned I hate Ria for kicking out my beloved Isaac? *glomps Isaac*

Oh well. I suppose she'll regret it later on, won't she?

Anyway... I love this fanfic! It's angsty funny and sometimes random and I love it! :D
Kitala chapter 20 . 6/15/2009
Very good chapter- Ria FINALLY figured it out! Oh, the teenage angst...
Dionysis chapter 20 . 6/15/2009
For. The. Win. TT Man, this is so good. She shouldn't have shoved Isaac out like that, though :( That earns a poke in the eye for Ria *poke* *off in the distance*: "YAH!"

*smile* ha. that's what she gets. poor Isaac. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter!
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 20 . 6/15/2009
Excellent chapter! Poor Ria-and poor confused Isaac :) I do love Isaac. Great work here. I loved Drac's calm attitude. Oh, and everyone had some great lines. Ria's was my favorite: “Because betraying a friend is so much better?” Loved that.
Andreille LeFlore chapter 20 . 6/15/2009

I just read the last two new chapters...

totally speachless now...

Now I cant wait for the next chapter xD

Poor Adriana... xD
Kitala chapter 19 . 6/11/2009
Poor Ria! She's really not having the best time, is she?
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 19 . 6/7/2009
I loved, loved, loved, that first scene with Isaac. It was deliciously thoughtful-I adored Isaac's thoughts on Belmonts as "children" and how it relates to his perception of Ria.

It seems poor Ria is beginning to get a clue about Alucard's oddness :) I loved that she got smacked by a zombie, poor dear. Very good chapter. A dose of intrigue, a dose of action. Nice job all around.
Kitala chapter 18 . 6/2/2009
Wonder when Ria'll find out about Draccie _
Lemonadder chapter 18 . 6/1/2009
O.O Well, that was a plot twist!

Gyaah! Isaac oblivious to Ria's feelings! *glomps Isaac*

Please write more! *puppy eyes*
Andreille LeFlore chapter 18 . 5/31/2009
Whoa... I did NOT see that coming!

So Alucard is actually Dracula? He had me fooled comepletely. XD

Now I KNOW I can't wait for the next chapter!
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