Reviews for Untested
Michael Dean chapter 3 . 3/3/2006
Great, nice work! The dialogue flows along well, and the story is getting more interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter to come about.
Kitala chapter 3 . 3/2/2006
*Wants to see what happens and demands more updates*
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 3 . 3/2/2006
Oh! That was awesome! GREAT job! Oh, *does a dance* I know who the hunter is, nanananana. heehee.
Kitala chapter 2 . 2/28/2006
I really like this. Make more.
Michael Dean chapter 2 . 1/28/2006
Hey, nice start of the story. I really like your style of story-telling. Just one (very) small thing, perhaps you could describe in a bit more detail the places and environments, such as the Belmont Manor's outside appearance. Just some friendly advice, so ignore it if you want. Anyway, keep up the good work, I'm curious where this story is going.
Huntydamus Belmont chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
Hm. Not bad at all. The OC in your fic outshined the horrible ones I've read on Good job.
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 2 . 1/17/2006
Someone was feeling whimsical. lol. Great fic! I love it!
A Shining Armour chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Um..nice. I liked it, I'm glad it wasn't Mary-Sueish. I loved the way you began the chapter-the opening line, that is. It was cool. And the plot seems intriguing. Well, hope you continue to write more!

Lucky
Alucardzheartbleeds chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
I thought your OC was frickin awesome! I can't believe that one bitch said that about your stories...I hope you delete that chick's review. Some people don't know the difference between a decent OC and a Mary Sue...Plus, how can you tell in from just this chapter...Man, I hate people who think they're always right. Anyhow, great story. You should really continue this...and don't take crap that isn't critique. Keep up the great work.
wayunlucky13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I wanna see where this goes... it sounds very, very interesting... I'll wait for the next...
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Oh, this is awesome, Trish! It's actually quite original...lol. I love it! Great job and many pokes for all the new stories.
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