Reviews for Smoke
Jade Cade chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
-coughs/gags- Wow, very realistic.. I can smell the smoke myself! -pause- Oh crap! That's not smoke from the story! That's my sister's attempt at baking cookies! Sorry..

Love this story, keep up the great work!
Mex-chick chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Excellent!
ayu chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
hehe.. cute!

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ffpanda chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
That was really sweet and well written!
Sakuma Sonnet chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
he can always smoke a little less -

not a yuki shuichi fan but this was good _
Hiei-Is-Mine chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Hawt man thats smokin
0ri chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
so cute! ; ; It's true too, no one seems to realize that the japanese really just don't give a shit if people want to fuck up their bodies with smoke. xD They have stuff like naked gackt dancing around in commercials, too, revealing the fact that they really don't care if their kids see it/are tramatized for life. they just DON'T care at ALL. gotta love that country.

So, anywho, kickass, fluffy peice of writing. :3 loveded it.