A really great story. Hope that it gets finished

Ow Harry please get a proper holster for that firearm.

I assume Tonks said "he" in an earlier draft, because I don't know what prompts Kingsley to say it.

I'm rereading this—great stuff, other than all the comma splicing—and for what it's worth, if anything and assuming you'll even see this: the moon is near-full out the window in Julius's room but is a sickle over the Forbidden Forest the same night.

A lot of twists and turns, and it’s always scary when you involve the fae.

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

Another really great chapter, thank you very much.

That was one hell of an opening chapter, great though

'Hadrian' gotta roll my eyes at this shit.

"And so, we lay to rest another vision, forsaken before its time, left to linger only in memory."

I was literally very bored. Didn't continue

He didn't even utilize apparition in his fight scenes. Gosh, this is lame as fuck

it's the 1st chapter, and despite the writer hyping him up too much to be "the best dark magic user in Britain, the next scenes aren't showing that well at all.

Damn youuuuyyu
You ended this wonderful fix with a fucking awesomest cliffhanger ever
Woahhhh dudeeee

everyone around him feels too competent, or rather we're getting their view too much, its too unenjoyable