Reviews for Circular Reasoning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A really great story. Hope that it gets finished |
![]() ![]() Ow Harry please get a proper holster for that firearm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I assume Tonks said "he" in an earlier draft, because I don't know what prompts Kingsley to say it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm rereading this—great stuff, other than all the comma splicing—and for what it's worth, if anything and assuming you'll even see this: the moon is near-full out the window in Julius's room but is a sickle over the Forbidden Forest the same night. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot of twists and turns, and it’s always scary when you involve the fae. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for another enjoyable chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another really great chapter, thank you very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one hell of an opening chapter, great though |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Hadrian' gotta roll my eyes at this shit. |
![]() ![]() "And so, we lay to rest another vision, forsaken before its time, left to linger only in memory." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was literally very bored. Didn't continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() He didn't even utilize apparition in his fight scenes. Gosh, this is lame as fuck |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's the 1st chapter, and despite the writer hyping him up too much to be "the best dark magic user in Britain, the next scenes aren't showing that well at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn youuuuyyu You ended this wonderful fix with a fucking awesomest cliffhanger ever Woahhhh dudeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() everyone around him feels too competent, or rather we're getting their view too much, its too unenjoyable |