Reviews for pretty girl
Katie chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
This is a really good story so far! Just getting good! It's such a shame that you haven't uploaded another chapter for a while. Please upload more soon!
Ellie Mae Thompson-Holmes chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
Lol I LOVE this story! so nicely written!

So um, I reviewed, does that mean you'll finally update? lol

Always,

Ellie
Samantha Boscorelli chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Loving it so far - your Gibbs seems very in-character to me - of course he would say they can't avoid it and then prolong the conversation but still keep her there. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Red.Gael chapter 3 . 1/1/2006
cool! please keep going, I love it!
witchyred chapter 3 . 12/5/2005
Interesting so far, and I'm curious to see where it will lead... can't wait to read more!
prin69 chapter 3 . 12/4/2005
very cool
prin69 chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
cool
prin69 chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
oh, this is really cool.
MissDiablo chapter 2 . 11/30/2005
Great story! :)
Tazallie chapter 2 . 11/30/2005
Wow she admited she loved him! now go Gibbs...good story, and a bit of an improvement on the writing errors...keep going its a good story
KangarooGirl chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Good start, I like it :) A couple of wrong words here and there but not enough to spoil the flow of the story.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes, update soon :)

Ms Fi
Tazallie chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
ok so whats up with the Abster? post more please
Thought chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Hey, interesting fic. Very interested to see where you go with this!