Reviews for Neko No Jutsu |
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![]() ![]() Aww you never said what Naruto got inscribed in the kunais! And i was curious what the other gifts were too. But anyway, I really fell in love with the reason why Naruto had a mask; I thought it was truly ingenious. The serious parts of this story were really touching and amazing! Also, I never thought Sasuke as a kitten could be soooooo adorable 3 |
![]() ![]() Chi is Itachi, and Ke is Sasuke. But it's Akatsuki, not atsuki. |
![]() ![]() I thought this had an excellent plot, great humor, and I LOVED the character progression with Naruto. I feel like Naruto should really be like this, even in Kishimoto's world. I wasn't a fan of Kyuubi having a human form since I much prefer him as a derranged demon. I've always had this image of Naruto finding a way to release Kyuubi in his true form but restricting his chakra flow so he could only have a certain amount of tails and dictate his size and behavior. Despite that, I did grow to like the Kyuubi in this story and his mischevious antics. Good job. There were only two problems that I found with this story, one of them being grammer, punctuation, and such. It became fairly difficult to read at times when words were switched up, misspelled, etc. The other was the mpreg...It was disturbing, wrong, impossible, unexpected, and completely unwanted. It definitely deserved a warning in the summary. The down side to that is that I would never have read this story, which I genuinly enjoyed. So thank you but at the same time, damn you for leaving out the warning. Excellent plot and characters. Find a beta and write another excellent story (Without the mpreg or with a warning, please!). |
![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() I absolutly love the whole story whole hearily33 and the fact u made Haku a girlXD poor haku always a girl, crossdresser, or a boy who never gets asked about gender people just asume hes a girl in stories but thx 4 writing i realy enjoyed it. Arigato33 |
![]() ![]() Chi itachi and Kesasuke |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked this story very much. thank you a great read. |
![]() ![]() sasuKE and itaCHI... heheh, uke... i liked that one, it was funny. anywho... love da story! is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ItaCHI and SasuKE, OH AND i LOVED THE UKE, HEH |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, I've enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing and finishing. For me the main story finished when they cleared things up between them, the scene where they kissed for the first time was really cute. I liked how you worked with Kyuubi and all the little details - Christmas presents, ramen, the red leash, Sakura... Also Naruto's 'double' personality was cool. Really, really cool idea and it's been nice to re-read the story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, this was my favourite chapter and it still is. * sigh * I know, I'm hopeless. * happy sigh * |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I remeber reading this story ages ago. The summary sounded interesting and though I found the constant A/N notes unnecessary, I'm glad I found this. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the kind of story you don't just read one time. I loved it, the characters, their personalities, everything! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the kind of story you don't just read one time. I loved it, the characters, their personalities, everything! |
![]() ![]() this chapter was really quite sweet- nicely done with this one. thanks for sharing |