Reviews for Beauty and the Beast Inuyasha Style! |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Nice way to break the depression at the end with "Tanuki." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do you have a character called Tanuki? That's what Hachi (miroku's semi-vassal) is, but it's not a name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Nice how this is going. Only criticisms so far is that it's written more like a script than a story and there are typos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) COl. Best Beauty and the Beast/Inuyasha yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when it comes to inuyasha, script format just doesnt work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i read this story when you put it up on the other site, but then i lost the site and i was so devastated that i couldn't find your story again! i loved it so much and when i saw you put it on here i was so happy! i just had to read it again! this story has got to be, by far and beyond, my most favorite story on this entire site. i hope you continue to write w/ your awesome skills! this story was so beautiful and i even started crying while inuyasha was dying/ after he died. this story was so great and full of emotion, keep up the amazing writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can tell your writing style is good, because you had my attention with the intro...but the rest of it is in screenplay style, which I personally can't read fluidly enough to enjoy. It would be a huge undertaking, but I think you might get a better following of readers/reviewers if you wrote it out normally. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi i luv ur stories especially this one pliss what is the adress of ur homepage i wanna see the pictures PSD: im a new here so i dont have stories yet bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how I love this story. I reviewed a million years ago, but I just wanted you to know this is one of the greatest stories of all time. I read it again just now... *sighs* just beautiful. I applaud. J'adore. |
![]() ![]() AW I LOVE THE ENDING! ! KAWAI! You are my fav writter please please keep writting love alex |
![]() ![]() lol so funny but sad its bitter sweet m i likey |
![]() ![]() WOOT! |
![]() ![]() so fucking funny! LMAO! Water fight, seems cool! |
![]() ![]() aw i want to cry now! *sobs* |