|Reviews for Wide Awake, Now|
| heidyurbano89 chapter 31 . 7/23/2011
Man, thanks for the mention. As for the tale, I love it! Thank you for completing this story, the name of Sage is really good and original and I spent with Stephanie and Hunter is good for the "relationship" between the two ... My humble request is that DUALTY done! That story has something that makes you want to read more and more ... this tale is good, I like, well, I like all your story, you're a good writer, congratulations and once more thank you very much for showing your talent.
| AttitudeEraChick chapter 31 . 7/23/2011
Everything about this chapter was cute. So glad you went through with having the section going into labor. Humorous, but very real reaction.
Nice to see the playful bickering with Shane, and interesting spin to use traditional vows, instead of their own. Lol at Vince's paranoia with letting her hand go.
| AttitudeEraChick chapter 30 . 7/23/2011
Loved this chapter. I especially liked how they're going back and forth in serious conversation, until Hunter very nonchalantly says they're going to renew their wedding vows. Steph's reaction was priceless.
I also like how after they emotionally have it, when it seems Steph wants to have a tender moment, he's ready to go back to sleep. Pleasantly sweet and humorous surprise. Earlier in the chapter, I was going "uh oh...here we go..."
| Jess chapter 31 . 7/22/2011
Loved this ending! The hospital scene was hilarious, yet sweet at the same time. Normally you don't hear Steph apologizing for freaking out on Hunter when there are scenes like this haha. I'm so sad to see this one finished! It's been a long time coming, and I'm so glad you have returned to the writing scene! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! )
| Jess chapter 30 . 7/22/2011
I'm so glad that that is out in the open, and that Hunter comforted her fear. It was interesting to see Steph's dynamic and reasoning for how she acts sometimes. I'm glad they've laid a foundation now to where they are able to hopefully move forward. Thank God that cop was understanding enough to know that if he were in the same situation, he would've done the same thing!
| dldb chapter 29 . 7/20/2011
For my sanity, I hope this whole baby thing is clarified soon! Awws! I just realised that its one more chapter till the end of this fic :(.
Thank gawd, Hunter got there just in time. Can't believe I'm about to say this but, damn you Austin! How dare you nearly shoot a pregnant woman, no wonder why Debra left you.
Post the finale ASAP (:
| Jess chapter 29 . 7/20/2011
Thank God he found her! Now the other little truth needs to come out. He needs to hear it from her mouth so it'll all be good. I don't think Austin's gone though..right?...he's not dead. Hopefully things will begin to settle down. Post more soon!
| AttitudeEraChick chapter 29 . 7/20/2011
It keeps getting better. :)
Now, I know she wants to tell him, but for the sake of the rest of the story, are you going to explain what happened at the arena during this fiasco? Did Vince replace the Hardy's opponents? He call for a suspension? Will Hunter text Shane and debrief him on how neccessary and serious the ramifications were for Steph's sake, that he bailed on his match?
I'm assuming they're going back to CT now, right?
I think next chapter will be packed. You have lots to explore, even if some are intertwined. , are you going to explain what happened at the arena during this fiasco? Did Vince replace the Hardy's opponents? He call for a suspension? Will Hunter text Shane and debrief him on how neccessary and serious the ramifications were for Steph's sake, that he bailed on his match?
I'm assuming they're going back to CT now, right?
I think next chapter will be packed. You have lots to explore, even if some are intertwined.
| AttitudeEraChick chapter 28 . 7/20/2011
Wow Hunter. You manage to get the facts when shit hits the fan, but not when Steph tries to have a civilized conversation with you? Men.
Austin's absurdity is funny. Good job at researching his lingo. I got a perfect picture of him, accent and all. Though it seems more logical for him to be after Rikishi. But oh well. Texans. Sigh. Lol
| Jess chapter 28 . 7/20/2011
Hunter has to get there. All the premonitions have proved to be so freaking helpful! I have a feeling Austin's gonna write til he gets there and do it right in front of him. I liked your description of Steph's thoughts while this was going on too. Ahh you have to post the next chap! lol
| dldb chapter 28 . 7/20/2011
WOOAAH! Maybe I should have read both chapter first before replying to you coz the guy I mentioned did keep coming to my mind. But then when I said the 'the villain right now' I was actually referring to Shane. Shame x_x LOL! I never thought, it would be Austin as Chp 10 and 14 both indicated Shane as the mastermind.
Oh Steve. How could you blame the trio. Its very ironic since he was the one that killed Debra because of his chaotic doings during their marriage and tries to take away two innocent lives because of him. Please. Grow some fucking balls. LOL! Hmm...
I hope Steph gets out alive and unharmed, same goes for the baby, but maybe you have something up your sleeve? :)
THANK GAWD! Hunter has finally realized the TRUTH. I applaud him and this whole story although its not yet finished! Can't wait for the grand finales of this story! xD
| AttitudeEraChick chapter 27 . 7/20/2011
Oh wow. Wasn't expecting Austin. I love the suspense in this chapter. PM me justifying him as the guy. The only thing I can think of is that he wants to kill Steph because she and Debra were too much of a distraction during their two man power trip him as the guy. The only thing I can think of is that he wants to kill Steph because she and Debra were too much of a distraction during their two man power trip dominance.
| Jess chapter 27 . 7/20/2011
Oh fuck, I knew it! He wasn't knocked out! It's liket he horror movie, you never stick around after you supposedly kill the crazy dude, a la Michael Myers! Fuck fuck fuck lol. Hunter needs to get there! Austin's gonna go bananas. You have to post more asap! lol
| dldb chapter 26 . 7/19/2011
Just read the last two chapters and I'm completely mesmerised. LOL. It has definitely something to do with this stalker thing and as I read on, one character kept popping up in my mind for some reason, but we'll just see. LOL!I hope that it isn't the person I think it is, that would just be upsetting. However, I curiously followed your hints about who could the stalker be. Really? That person? Not who I was thinking about but it'll be an interesting one to read why he became so hateful to the McMahon-Helmsley faction.
Now, Steph-Hunter continue to amaze me. They're both hiding things from each other and yet they both want a trustworthy, loving, loyal and caring foundation for a relationship. Well, they should start being honest right now! Steph should tell Hunter soon but maybe after this stalker shit is finished and :
| Jess chapter 26 . 7/19/2011
Is it Austin? I think so! The driver is bald and he happens to appear to get on Trips's good side right at the right moments! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh you have to post more soon lol I didn't even realize you updated yesterday!