Reviews for Knowing
CheyRain chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I believe that this should be rated M because of the language. It is a good story and it makes me curious for more. Who is this mysterious Death Eater narrator? Do they spill the secret to the Dark Lord or do they keep it secret for the brother the person loves? Do Pansy and Ginny face the facts or do they remain secretly knowing? I want to know more.
Sincerely,
CheyRain
Khashana chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Very nice. I see people thinking Blaise Zabini is the narrator, and I thought so too, at first, but what about Snape? Snape really is a Death Eater and a spy for Dumbledore, and he's an excellent Legilimens. I suppose the date of the story might give us a clue, but I haven't figured out how to read the dates yet, they seem to be in a different order than I'm used to. 11/29/05...I'm guessing month/day/year? Well, that's after OoTP came out, which is the first time I think we know for sure Snape's a spy. I love how I'm talking to you as though you don't already know all this. I'll be quiet now.
fourteenwings chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Wow, this is really good. sigh, starcrossed lovers, you give Romeo & Juliet a new and way better meaning. How I wish they would just... never mind...
LittleSnowPea chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
What can you do? Sometimes people are completely obtuse, stupid, arrogant- the list goes on and on. I'd think poisoning those two little bimbos tea would suffice but if you won't stoop to murder, I can't imagine what would help. I guess sit back and watch them. If it's true love, it'll find a way, no matter how Gryffindor *that* phrase sounds.

Good Luck with this, even though a Slytherin has no use for luck.

(great job)

-LSP
Little Green Voice chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
That's an interesting question you put there in the end. For some reason this scenario is one of the most in character from our two favourite lover boys - at least on my opinion. We all know they have the chemistry, but we all know they also have the history of hate, the Romeo&Juliet-thing in their families, the Slytherin versus Gryffindor rivalry with their houses and best friends... need I say more? It sure isn't the easiest way to start a relationship openly...

That was an intereting take on telling the story with that legilimency thing, by the way. Harry having his walls worce down than the first years doesn't surprise me at all ;) For one reason or another I really hope that the person telling the story would do something. With that situation, Harry and Draco definitely need a kick on their butt!
Insanity0Rocks0My0Socks chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
My goodness that was beautiful! It was well written and everything! I can't even begin to describe how wonderful this was!
Rubik's Cubed chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Im too lazy to sign in right now, so whatever...And I know you wrote this like 5 years ago, but I just read it today so Im just reviewing today. Its very well written and quite enjoyable, but I tend to enjoy things that arent in first person more and try to stay away from first person. I myself have a one-shot HPDM in first person and I dislike the way it came out for that reason. But anyways good job your a good writer.
0000000000000001234 chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
hey, love it, its great. dying to know tha POV lol. update soon plz XX soph XX
thrnbrooke chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
And does it ever come out?
dedaccountisded chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
This is very good. Kepp on the good work!
kumara and bacon chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
i really liked the style, but i'd really like to know from whose POV it was. i really did like it. keep up the good work!
Gryffindorgrl86 chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
o..i like it! Very clever format..please continue!
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Wow. This is really good. I love the style, very nice. Hope you don't mind, but I must add this to my C2.
siberian-emerald chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Full of sarcasm... and your language pulize! har har... well overall, it's a good piece... fine, it's a GREAT piece... but I dun like the ending... dunno... it's just not 'click' to me... if u know what I mean...

anyway... is the person 'you' is Ron? or somebody else? Well, I know that the 'I' is a slytherin... is it Zabini? or just an anonymous? I remember you told me that he is an anonymous, but it's rather strange, ya know... as you said he 'love Draco like a brother..' and someone who can be close enough with the Slytherin ice prince to love him as a brother... (love him as a brother is the key word... not lust from far...) can't be just an anonymous slytherin... rite?

well duh, if I keep writing I'm gonna make this review as an essay... harharhar.. forgive my lameness...
Yawping Stance chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Wow. Just out of curiousity, who's POV was that from? Other than that...wow.

~Samdum~
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