Reviews for If
sanperry chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
This is wonderful - it shows perfectly the doubts and excited fear Abby went through with Luka.
Jools chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
To. Die. For.
Shameem chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
A little poem, yes indeedy, a little poem. Bless.
Faith has quit all fandoms chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
sorry it took me so long to review honey, my comp went nuts on me and hated me this morning!

I so love this, it is short yet it makes you think...
justawritier chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
really cute.
Trapped in a MatchBox chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
omg that was so perfect! i loved it!
JoJo chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Aw, you know I love your fic about Luka and Gillian but I love this too. Natasha Isis said it was poetic and I agree it's like alittle poem.

And youknow what else it made me realize that the way things went with Luka and Abby the morning after was all down to Luka.
Moioui chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
man... i loved this...
Nancy K chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
What an absolutely lovely endeavor. Thanks for such a short piece that managed to capture so much emotion. Please keep writing.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
I liked this. Short, but I think it works. Any longer, and it wouldn't have the same effect. Nice job. :)
Natasha Isis chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
I'm lost.


cute and poetic.

I just need to know who you're talking about...

Luka and Abby? Just a guess.


Sara Kovac chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
It's very short, but you put lots os feeling in it. Very good. And BTW thanks for offering to be my beta.