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![]() ![]() ![]() 3. Dont care |
![]() ![]() ![]() this... is random and insane. I WANT MORE! |
![]() ![]() What...the heck...is this? It's so out of character, no offence |
![]() ![]() ...Poor Retasu Please update soon,I love PaixZakuro! |
![]() ![]() I love this fanfic. I'm a big fan of ZakuroxPai and i really want that you write more about them. Ok. bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO Not a car! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wasn't gonna review anymore stories for tonight because it's getting pretty late, but... the last part was darn hilarious! Normally I'd be sad about a mew dying- but the randomness of it all... made it beyond funny! I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh heh, that's funny, mixed with random! You know, at times, those can be about 'the' best combinations. :D Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was funny I like the yekking Pai's name alot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Put her with Keechiro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! It seemed short, but that was because of the way you typed it up. I like this format, or whateva they would call it. By the way,I went to my grandmas house for tues-sat(5 days), and went to the zoo, amusement park, beach... but only took a shower on saturday so my mom wouldn't know! Eiiw... No shower in five days. I don't do that often, by the way! I just didn't want to take a shower because the shower doors are all see through and someone may walk into the bathroom when I'm takin' my shower! I'm almost clean now though! |
![]() ![]() Well. . . if you don't like the characters together, you can have some of them friends and some of them enemies! or you could just leave them in seperate chapters! UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Pai. XD hhahaha he can't take a shower in peace. Very nice story I really liked it! UPDATE soon! |