Reviews for Cafe Elric
HopeXIII chapter 9 . 12/30/2007
Oh wow... way to go with the cliff hangar there.

Which means...


As good as this story is, here comes the constructive criticism.

I don't like the Authors notes that are in the middle of the chapter, and I'm saying this for everyone. Well I guess thats because I don't like A/N's just in general, though I do use them a few times in my stories...

but still do whatever you want, i'll read it anyway.

Thanks for writing! Update soon pwease!

Sora Blade707 chapter 9 . 3/17/2007 haven't updated in...what? A year now? Anyway, this is getting interesting, so don't quit now! By the way, I'm totally going to remember that Ed is an "angst whore." XD Please update this fic!
girl1213 chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
I said it before three months ago and I'll say it again, STOP LEAVING US HANGING!

*leaves to calm down for a mintue*

Seriously...don't stop this story.
girl1213 chapter 9 . 12/3/2006
Stop leaving us hanging! This story is too good to stop now.
Vaoni chapter 9 . 9/26/2006
UPDATE! you've left us hanging!
SleeplessDreaming chapter 9 . 8/2/2006
I love this story, it funny and Al is one of my fav char's so its all good . I really hope you update soon! The Fred person ish really funny, except I think he has a bit of an ubssession with rape...sounds like my friend O_o.

Sincerely Rie
vegetable chapter 4 . 7/12/2006
Hm... How would you fit Envy and Lust into this fic?

Maybe Hoenhiem remarried and Envy is Ed's half brother?

And Lust is... Waugh! Forget I said anything! O_o
vegetable chapter 9 . 7/12/2006
O_o... That end note was scary and extremely disturbing... but anyway.

I hope to see the next chapter soon, this fanfiction seems to going in an interesting direction.


Also because of the cliffhanger.
gigi chapter 9 . 6/2/2006
UPDATE! ive been waiting for so long! please *puppy dog eyes*
Jebby chapter 9 . 5/18/2006
Oh! you Wench! you'd better not stop here! Not now that I've finally found an Al/Ed fic I can read and not feel dirty about. XD
youwish chapter 9 . 4/24/2006
hey! great story!

i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
supermoo chapter 9 . 4/19/2006
keep on going with the story! i shall watch for updates.
RainOwl chapter 9 . 3/6/2006
fred scares me. and I want you to write more! this is a wonderful story.

issues09 chapter 9 . 3/4/2006
great job its really good can'y wait for more :)
dfshfksdhafj chapter 9 . 3/2/2006
i love this story. i'd like to see those two get together XD good job, keep updating!
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