Reviews for Weaker Moments
1valleygirl4 chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
wow. that was deep. I loved it!
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
An interesting walk into the mind of evil. Enjoyable.
KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
wow! that was very well written! sad, but a nice, and diffrent way at looking at Dan! great job!
Firefury Amahira chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
This is really good, I like your way of portraying Dan. I know a lot of authors tend to make him senselessly evil or all brooding-angsty, but you got into his psychology really well. It's kinda amusing, actually, the way you portray Dan synchs up really well with how I've got him in my fic Anathema XD

The paragraph about heartbeat and breathing is particularly potent, it really reminds the reader that there is virtually nothing "human" left about the guy. And the paragraph about the emblem gives the guy more depth than what a lot of authors do with him.

Kudos on an excellent job of portraying one of the most psychologically complicated characters on the show D
N.L chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
O MY GOODNESS that, WOW, that was just, WOW, i mean WOW that was to perfect for his personality (if he has one)
MixedBerry chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Hey, great piece! I really enjoyed it.
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Aww...I love Dan. I'm going to cry now...that was beautiful.
The Sleep Warrior chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
that was some awesome insight! i had always wondered what he meant by that statement. now i know! well, i know your version. anywho, this was awesome! keep writing! :D :P
SummersSixEcho chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Great story! It really gives you another perspective on Danny's ultimate enemy. (I'm not good at reviews, hehe)
NoAvailableData chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Very, very, VERY nice.

Excelent work.
EnigmaticPenguin chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Dark, very dark... but good all the same. Now all we need is a bunny suit! A big pink fuzzy one with floppity ears. Heheh...

Anyway, good job! I hope to see more of your work soon. I think. It really just depends on whether or not I like the story idea... Oh boy, that sounded so supportive, didn't it? *insert sarcasm here* *sighs* Okay, I'll leave you with a nice, big, friendly "You write well!" and leave it at that. And then go draw a picture of evil Danny in a bunny suit. Because I can.

-E.P.
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
wow... just wow this was some deep monologue you wrote here, it was very good.