|Reviews for One Song|
| GraviMegaFan chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Wow, Ryuichi is so...adult in this. I'm confused though.
Is he watching Yuki and Shuichi do it? Or his he fucking Shuichi?
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
It's not full of mistakes. You did great.
Ryuichi is an entity that cannot be understood. XD Seriously. Someone who can act as well as he can has secrets; why else would they put up a face?
Maybe you should write something on that. _
| fiorae chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
i didnt see any mistakes. i like it, a little peak into the sexy god's mind
| kovu chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
that was hot... but it had heart _
| Lances chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
This was really good. I agree with Ryu: if Shuichi would ever leave Yuki and later on call it just 'infatuation', and then get together with me, I would honestly always question Shuichi's true feelings. His love with Eiri-san is just so strong. Seemingly. But I'm a rabid Shu/Ryu fangirl, so in my head everything's possible between them two. :)
| Phantom of Spades chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
That was amazing. Yes, I too am fascinated by the secrets behind the adorable Ryuichi as well; behind that childish demeanor lies a lot of things we don't know, that's for sure. Anyway, great job!
| i h chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
the beagining was al ittle confusing
but i liked the rest
wrigh more soon
| hyperryu-chan69 chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
awesome ! i love you !
| Stuckiesama chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
can we say...kickass? i think you should do a separate shuichi/ryuichi story. i have a feeling that you would write some very interesting and original kind of stuff. im adding you to my author alerts list to see if you do that...WAH please do it?
| TheFightingAlchemist chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
hey this was good and if you continue it to another chapter then I will be very pleased. so if you can and if you feel like it get started on the next chapter right away okay? okay see you then.
| Haninozuka Mitsukuni chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Damn! that was good!
I love RyuShu!
Won't you consider a sequel? haha o
It's hard for me to understand Ryuichi too but he's absolutely Cute! a sweetheart, HOT! etc. etc. hahaha