|Reviews for Twostroke|
| Kishyka chapter 8 . 3/13/2013
As an animal rescuer and transformers fan, this is one of the most adorable series I have ever read. Descriptive dialog and heart-felt characters make this a warm and engaging story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Moonlight black rose chapter 8 . 1/13/2012
aaawwwwwwwwww so adorablez
| CrimsonDragon2.9 chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
This is incredibly cute and I would love to read more.
| Fianna9 chapter 8 . 9/9/2011
I don't know if you'll ever continue this here, but it's a wonderful story. All of the different interactions with Twostroke are entertaining to read.
| CosmicEssence chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
hehe a kitty in a robot base? strangely it works. liked the name and how she got ratchet and the dinobots on her side, as well as that first interest in Bluestreak. Also liked the interaction that went on with this fic. too bad there's been no more added to it!
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 8 . 3/26/2011
"If invoked, the threat of the wrath of the Chief Medical Officer was not a thing to be trifled with."
Very well stated.
Since she walks around fine in Communique, does that mean she got her replacement leg?
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 7 . 3/26/2011
Sideswipe let out a snort of disgust. "Ten minutes and me and Sunny 'ill have him screaming so loud he'll bust his vocals."
"Us Dinos do it in five." Grimlock rumbled, the rest of his team voicing their agreement.
"She will." Grimlock interrupted, adamant. "She tough-cat. No stupid Decepticons kill her."
You are reminding me just how much I love the Dinobots (TFAnimated continued them nicely).
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
So you're a cat person? You're VERY accurately communicating how cats act towards their specific humans and the humans' family.
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
Makes sense that the Dinobots would grow to like her. They're animalistic bots (if prehistoric) and cats are hunters. Swoop and Grimlock probably appreciate that.
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
"Quite a few of the more violently-inclined Autobots had grown to like the cat, not to mention Ratchet, and they would all be more than moderately upset if Twostroke happened to suddenly vanish."
She found Ravage? Good girl.
But hissing at him? I would've thought they would get along at least somewhat. But that depends on whether you call Ravage a cat or a dog (I think Ravage is supposed to be a dog in the Spanish version).
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
She won over Ratchet? Wow.
"Winding them around her paw" cats are REALLY good at that.
Hey, has anyone drawn pictures of Twostroke yet?
- the crazy cat lady
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
D'awww, Prime's a softie!
| Jacqueline Faber chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I finally got curious enough to look up "Twostroke" from Communiqué chapter 5.
| Kishyka chapter 8 . 11/29/2010
This series is so adorable! I especially love the way you describe what Twostroke is thinking. As a humble cat slave, I am thoroughly enamored with this little kitty. I can just imagine the pile of Dinobots topped by a purring kitten!
Very well done on the characters and description. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Mikoto-chan92 chapter 8 . 11/4/2010
Aww! So adorable! Cats are the best! X3