Reviews for The Shiny Affair of Mr Pink
CalmintheChaos chapter 18 . 11/20/2006
I cannot wait until your next chapter! I absolutely LOVE this story! Everyone is perfect, it's funny, and cute. I think it would've made a great episode if the show had survived. I can see everything perfectly like I'm watching the show. Fantastic work!
erinmarie5 chapter 18 . 6/27/2006
You know, I almost stopped reading at Chapter 5 because I hate it when anyone breaks Jayne.

I'm really glad I kept reading.

And I REALLY hope you post another chapter soon!
lilmercenarygirl chapter 18 . 3/18/2006
finish... finish!

jayne forever! yum yum yum
Kasei Tomodatchi chapter 18 . 2/1/2006
Hehe, poor Jayne! Threatening him with Vera's life. x3 Ah well, the plans never go smoothly anyway. I like this fic a lot, can't wait to read more!
Ashnan chapter 18 . 1/10/2006
I love this. Jayne is just too cute for words. And I'm interested to see where the job goes and how it turns out. Can't wait for next chapter.
moirariordan chapter 18 . 1/9/2006
Two chapters! I squee-d when I saw that you'd updated this. You've got Jayne's voice down so well, it's amazing. And the Jaylee stuff doesn't hurt, either. Awesome, awesome job. XD

Kasei Tomodatchi chapter 16 . 1/6/2006
*squeal* I'm LOVING this! xD Holeemunkies, you _have_ to upload soon! It's about time they finally hooked up, all the romantic tension was killing me. x] I can't wait to see what else develops! :D
Kasei Tomodatchi chapter 7 . 1/6/2006
Aw, such a cute chapter! Poor Jayne, who would've thought that he was so inexperienced with kissing? x3 Anyway, just wanted to drop a quick note on how sweet I thought this chapter was before I move onto the next. You're doing a great job so far, I can't wait to see where this goes! :D
mercurybard chapter 16 . 1/2/2006
While the main focus seems to be on Jayne and Kaylee trying to get together, the background caper is mucho entertaining. Jayne's voice sounds good, and Mr. Pink is just too funny!
Amelia Incognita chapter 16 . 12/21/2005
*happy sigh* Perfect. Spot on characterization, and a hilarious storyline. Can't wait for more.


p.s. Stella and Marie are great original characters
Ashnan chapter 16 . 12/20/2005
That is just so sweet! Jayne is a big softy. Makes me just want to cuddle him. Well, and do other things with him that we shall not mention.
Twilite chapter 16 . 12/20/2005
That was ruttin' beautiful.
Ashnan chapter 15 . 12/19/2005
The part about the Rebecca/Jayne(Zeke)/Kaylee/Simon(Jayne) [that's a little confusing] was great. But I 'bout fell off my seat laughing when it got to Jayne bein' sly and after Simon.

Just great stuff here.
Ashnan chapter 13 . 12/16/2005
I love it.

That was way too short. You are a tease. Please update this really soon!
dervishspin chapter 12 . 12/13/2005
wow. This story rules! You have the voices dead on. That's hard to do in this particular universe. Good work. Being inside Jayne's head is such a strange place to be but you pull it off very well.
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