|Reviews for Underneath the Underneath|
| YearoftheDragon chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
. It was well writtien
| Foyet chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
I like it, very cool story.
| cfox chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
What a wonderful take on the Uchiha sibilings, I like how you have them interact with each other and it is nice to see that someone else thinks that Sasuke despite all that he has done still has trouble hating his bro.
| iamfreak chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Nicely written, but a they're a OOC. What annoyed *Sasuke* the most was a lack of emotion? That doesn't quite fit. Good story though.
| Impersonating-an-entity chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Hm, good base idea but the characterizations felt a little off, particularly Itachi, and at the end Sasuke went rather awry too. If you clean it up a little and make it more true to the characters, you will have a very good fic. -
Anyhow, if you're not sure about what I mean feel free to e-mail me and if you do revise this later let me know so I can reread, please. -
Entity, The Keeper and Imanen-sama
| anon chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
wow, this piece is so moving and expressive, good job in conveying the emotions!:)