Reviews for Defeated
Butterfree chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
A very nice rewrite indeed!

Most authors make the mistake in these kinds of stories, to simply retell what happened in the anime/manga but replace some 'he/she's with 'I'. Your story wasn't like that at all! I could definetly follow Hao's feelings throughout the one-shot.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
frostedheavens chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Nice fic. :)
Lero chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
that's one of my favorite moments of shaman king. thank you for not changing anything. you did a good job in putting it all in Hao's pov.
Satan Junior No Super Hentai chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
nice
kkkkkitty chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
good job!
jusnoneko chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
very nice story! I don't think that Hao is very OOC, he is different inside he wears a mask like many other shaman king characters do so this story is very good! _
The NeveRendiNg DarKneSS chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
it was nice i loved it