|Reviews for Walking the Line|
| Darth Luffy chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
This series is perfect bedtime reading, it's light hearted, fluffy, and still funny even when I know what will happen, sometimes it's funnier because I know what happens later on, like knowing how Betty is way later on compared to how she is now
I also had a thought, I wonder how many times Kim has gotten requests to be an escort on her site, she can do 'anything' after all... I thougt I was being original too for all of 5 seconds till I realized that there are probably a hundred fics that use that same premise already
| Concolor44 chapter 19 . 6/7/2013
What do I think of the story? Well ...
1 - It was INTENSELY captivating.
2 - It is now almost 0230 hours because I couldn't stop reading.
3 - You handle grammar well, for the most part, and I appreciate it deeply.
4 - Although the story is, as you put it in such droll terms, "AU like a mug" (love your terminology), you've managed to preserve the essential traits, flaws, and idiosyncrasies of the characters, and THAT, my friend, is goin' some.
5 - When I realized I was almost at the end of the story and their relationship was TERMINATING, I nearly panicked. How, I wondered, could you do this to your poor readers? Oh, the humanity! But then I saw that word, that wonderful, blessed, oh-so-welcome word: "Continued". Huzzah!
Yes, I will be CONTINUING this story, because it's a moral imperative and I have no other reasonable option. What, you want me to fret myself into a stupor? Please. I'm no fool...
... well, except maybe for the staying up until ridiculous hours, engrossed in a great, heaping pile of lovely words ... words the taste of which I cannot get enough. That might be considered foolish. By some.
This goes into Favorites. It SOOO does. But I can't start "On a Short Leash" yet. I'm so tired I can barely focus my eyes well enough to type, and I am wearing OUT that backspace key.
'night. And THANK YOU.
| Darth Luffy chapter 19 . 6/3/2013
When I first started reading this I thought it was a bit funny and kinda twisted, afterall if Kim was just some orpahned, dumb, street kid it wouldn't be very funny... that changed as soon as Wade called and it became obvious that Kim Possible, the girl who can do anything, was now Shego's pet, loved the story and found it to be one of the funnier pieces I've read, the image of Kim cuddling up next to Shego, waking up and running away from Shego's now flaming hands, and then diving and hiding under a cardboard box is going be stuck in my head for a while and since it's hilarious that works out fine
| Concolor44 chapter 10 . 5/22/2013
I am having the best time reading this story! Although it is, as you so pithily put it, "AU like a mug", and although I don't typically ENJOY AU-type stories because it is usually done in order to violate the characters in some fashion ... this one is enchanting. How you have managed to let Kim be Kim even in what may be the weirdest circumstance she's ever seen is a real wonder. Shego's not as difficult (she's not as complex, let's face it) so seeing her as a Special Forces cop isn't that big a stretch.
Anyway, thanks! I'll post additional comments as they occur to me.
| Concolor44 chapter 6 . 5/17/2013
This is ... the ... fourth? Yeah, probably fourth time I have STARTED this story, and this is the farthest I've gotten to date. Something always derails me. This time, though, I'm bookmarking it. Because NOW you have introduced some extremely compelling plot complications that I'd never seen before, and now you have REALLY grabbed my interest.
(Side note: the past tense of the verb "lead" is "led". The noun "lead", as in the dull, gray, poisonous metallic element that is denser than gold, has nothing to do with "leading" or having "led" in the sense of getting someone or something to follow you around.)
I've got to assume that either A] there is some sort of inter-dimensional exchange going on, or B] one of Drakken's inventions mind-wiped a bunch of people, or C] ... I have no freaking clue and can't wait to see how this pans out.
| Earu chapter 19 . 3/9/2013
Great story, looks like you've integrated some stuff from Kimi Wa Petto greatly with KP characters, a well done relationship up the good work :)
| Hewhoislost chapter 19 . 1/23/2013
Man I love these universe you craft. I mean just wow.
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/12/2013
Another fantastic story! I've read all of your pariah stories, and am really glad you wrote this A/U as well. Can't sing enough praise, but I hope you never stop writing
| crazybrit1987 chapter 2 . 11/11/2012
nice to see Shego trying to drive Kim crazy
| crazybrit1987 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
good start i think this might turn out better than the vampire Kim series
| Zuli chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
Well, hello there SL! God, I remember reading this ages ago. How I've missed it! This is one of my absolute favorite universes ever and it feels good to be back :D
| Goth Albino Angel chapter 5 . 9/22/2012
*deadpan voice* Drakken? Seriously? Oh Goddess, I'm about to die of laughter. *a beat. Falls over laughing* Chiller! And what's about to happen next is probably going to be just as good. Woohoo! Oh, uh, there are instances where Shego's pov refers to Kim as... Kim, but Shego doesn't know her name yet.
| Goth Albino Angel chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
You own the computer you're typing on, right? That counts as owning something. By the. Way this story has me hooked just enough that I keep reading and because of what you just said would happen next, I'm somewhat curious to find out what's going on next. Great job so far and totally loving the fangtastic story.
| UnBrokenFlow chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
| DarkJosey66 chapter 19 . 6/24/2012
Another great story i thoroughly enjoy im now im moving on next part of this lovely story