Reviews for Cortez vs Monkey
Afro7hundr chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Apologetic Physicist chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I'm speechless, and not in a good way...
KedakaiOkami chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
OMG that was so funny! XD I couldn't contain my laughter, and I'm sitting in a classroom.
Serene-Moon-Princess chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
LOL, this sucked! (but I loved it anyway) If some things would have been fixed up this would have been awesome. My fav part of this story was the "time to split...your azz." I found that rather funny for some odd reason.
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Could have been MUCH better... maybe some personality given to the monkey. ( maybe an annoying wink or something) And fill in some gaps... when most people read, they generally like to not think about any gaps and just read... i think i'm done ranting. clean this up a little, and it's golden!
Langwurst chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Err, definite potential but the language needs a little revision as it's a little hard to read sometimes but as I said potential could be great
Battlechicken22 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
yup... your user name says it all...
Alliance THE chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
If you are going to parady Timesplitters make a decent effort. Nice idea but it lost so much when you couldn't be bothered to do the work necessary for it to be good