| Reviews for Field of Fallen Leaves |
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   redfe chapter 1 . 6/13/2008 This story gave me goose bumps. Love the imagery. Very well written. |
| wsdr chapter 1 . 3/14/2008 Wow, this was just a very pretty and introspective piece. I love how symbolic the seasons were, and the language that you used was poetic and I felt myself reading everything without stopping once becuase I was so caught up with it. It really was very deep and just extremely angsty without being overwhelming; you have a beautiful grasp on words, and I can't help but be enamored with your style. Amazing fic, I wish it got more recognition though. |
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 8/3/2007 So grim... |
| Asami-chann chapter 1 . 3/21/2007 Beautiful. I love it! |
| timidhinata chapter 1 . 2/11/2007 I have a question: i checked out Hiashi's profile and found out that he is 42 during the first season of Naruto. In that season, Hinata is 12-13 years old, meaning that she was born when Hiashi was 30. Thus, it would be impossible for Hiashi to be 19 the same year the Yondaime died, also the same year Naruto with born and the year Naruto was born would be the year Hinata was born. Of course, all this ranting would have no meaning if the Hyuuga Twins you were talking (well, writing) about was Hiashi and Hizahi. Overall, great fic_ |
| Gothkat chapter 1 . 9/16/2006 oh my god i dont think i have ever read a story that powerful in my life brillent make sure try to write an origanl story it might get puiplished. |
| naash chapter 1 . 9/4/2006 Oh wow that was brilliant.. I love the quote it is very fitting to the story. The imagery that you use of the season and such highlights the story more. All in all I'm imp[ressed. Even I could not write a story this good. good job |
| openwindow2 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006 *sigh* such a sad, sad story...i liked it though... |
| bellatrix007 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006 this story was deep :'( and sad! its so depressing...and i LOVE IT! please continue writing like this, it is awsome! |
| bubblekid chapter 1 . 4/4/2006 Absolutely. Gorgeous. *tear* I'm just completely speechless. |
| sna chapter 1 . 3/24/2006 oh ki, the colours in this one - the colours in the images and symbols and the carefully chosen weaving of each line into its section and each section into the story... it just makes this such a wonderfully hollistic read in so many clever ways. i can't believe i didn't manage to read this for so long, it's wonderful. and so are you and your writing skills. |
| aditou chapter 1 . 3/5/2006 Very poetic and elegantly composed. I'm inspired. |
| Bijyu Within chapter 1 . 2/28/2006 ARG! I cant stop reading one shots... I must go do something else...yes i must...i must read a long story for once... |
| Pontificator chapter 1 . 2/12/2006 Utterly, utterly, beautiful. There's such an exquisite exactness in the way you write. |
| Revised chapter 1 . 12/26/2005 Very poetic, I'm inspired! Your word usage rocked. The phrases were very elegant. |