Reviews for Field of Fallen Leaves
Rin-neechan chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
OMG!*cries* It's soo well written, but sad...but I'd say it's accurate. Very nice job, you know they were stuck together like two pieces of double sided tape...hahaha...
een nihc chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
beautifully writen!bravo...
YamiPaladinofChaos chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Subtle, hauntingly beautiful. Loved it down to the last word.
Ariana Deralte chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Beautiful imagery, not just with the theme of seasons but with the text as well. It was short, but it feels complete. Lovely job:)
bobo3 chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Wow, Ki. Wow indeed.

It's so hauntingly beautiful and well timed and well written and...everything. I've never thought myself particulalry skilled at one shots, but you? Totally rule at them.

I'm so glad I've actually gotten to know you as more than just a girl across the room.

-beloved
Azamiko chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Lovely prose...
ElasticBobaTurtle chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Ook. Very nice; I love the chronology/structure of the piece-it adds a nice feel to it. Especially since summer is lost. Nicely done.
Black chimeras1127 chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
It's very solem, but very good. Your other works will be appreciated
Katamari Damacy chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
That was brilliant! Not only one of the best Naruto fics I've read, but one of the best one-shots I've seen.

I liked the way you presented the days before the Kyuubi attacked. The desolate feeling that would have followed the war, and how everyone was trying to get back to normal afterward.

You put a lot of thought into this and it shows. Good job!

Katamari Damacy
fukkafyla chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
That was beautiful and poetic.

I like to think that "That generation was born in winter." symbolised how they were never really young.
JleeBean chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
That was so wonderfully "poignant" (hee, spelled right and everything!). You write symbolism so well here; and as an avid fan of symbolism/metaphors, I praise you!
Fille de Tsuki chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Aw! *weeps with the awesomeness* The seasons! The youth of the characters so often ignored! T3h beauty!

Darn you! Your writing is so good, I just don't know how to critique it. But keep in mind, I read everything you post, even if I am at a loss for a review. _
Dolphin River chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Oh man, that is so sad. The way that Kakashi lost the last two people in his life on the same night. You really are a magnificent- poignant- writer!
link no miko chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Wow Kichan, I really loved reading this. It was so beautiful and lovely and like...a painting. Each section was its own mural, full of images and feelings. And each part had one defining image for me, and I loved that. The leaves tearing away as Rin watches, Kakashi not pulling away from her, "That summer never came to Konoha."

And then that last part, ohmygosh. Just about -all- of it is defining. From the image of Kakashi kissing her (of which I loved the wording, absolutely positively -adored- it) to the last line, it's just... Yeah. I don't even know what I'm saying anymore, that's what it was.

And the description of Kakashi's eyes and crying. You rock so hard, Kichan.

*hugs* Thank you for the fic! Thank you so much!
Qem chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Oh beautifully written and very creepy
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