Reviews for The Guardian in Spite of Herself chapter 14 . 11/30/2011
I am very impressed with these two stories. Normally I hate OCs in fanfiction, but you have really made these interesting and realistic, and enjoyable. I especially love the interactions with Kakashi. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Yuuki no Yuki chapter 14 . 11/29/2011
Aww, Im up-to-date, that's so sad. I hope you update soon, and for the record while I enjoy switching back and forward between characters I feel that all interactions dealing with Eiji seem to drag, probably because I have no emmotional attachment to him or anyone he's interacting with...this series is re~ally interesting though, and I hope it gets a move on, its been nearly a year...I just want it to progress a bit.
Madame Minuit12 chapter 14 . 10/2/2011
iu didn't that there was a sequel to the way of an appartement manager, but this is wonderful :DDD

i enjoyed it a lot and i look forward to the next chapter!
lounger chapter 14 . 9/30/2011
nice chapter
ShirouHokuto chapter 14 . 9/5/2011
AHHHHHHHHH, I AM LOVING THIS FIC. ;o; ITACHI YOUR TERRIBLE FACE YOUR TERRIBLE PLANS YOUR TERRIBLE EVERYTHING oh Sasuke I know you hate hugs but I want to give you A LARGE NUMBER OF HUGS. Shut up and listen to Yukiko, okay, she's awesome. ;o; YUKIKO I WOULD LIKE TO MARRY YOU.

... Sasuke sticking leaves down Seichi's pants made my night AWESOME. Well, my very early morning awesome whoops I have stayed up really late reading your fic and that is at least 65% of why my comment is stupid and disjointed! ANYWAY I AM SUBSCRIBING GLEEFULLY and can't wait for more! Well, I mean, I CAN WAIT AS LONG AS NECESSARY but I'll definitely be looking forward to updates!
librarycat9 chapter 8 . 8/16/2011
I really don't want that family to die... :(
librarycat9 chapter 7 . 8/16/2011
If Itachi is the contact this could all get real dicey...
librarycat9 chapter 4 . 8/16/2011
this is not going to end well... but thats what happens when you eavesdrop. It's good that she isn't actually going after Itachi though...
librarycat9 chapter 3 . 8/16/2011
well shoot... that is a bit over the top. I hope Yukiko stays safe and gets a lot of info... she may even run into the pervert. lol :D I really like your writing style! :D
librarycat9 chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
I hope Danzou bastard doesn't get to Tsukime...
librarycat9 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I love Asuka! :D I hope Naga is okay...
bookaholic72 chapter 14 . 6/23/2011
Sorry this is less a chapter review than encouragement. I just finished reading "The Way of the Appartment Manager" and the first part of this story and can't help but comment on the fact that I've never read a fanfic with this many oc's that was good let alone as fantastic as your stories.
Rasei chapter 14 . 6/14/2011
Silly Naruto... he is so adorable. About Itachi... did he do it for the same reason as in the manga?
Fro52 chapter 14 . 6/1/2011
read "way of the apartment manager" and just got done with chapter 14 of the sequel. every time i catch up with a story that's still in progress, i are sadface.

that aside, the story continues and does so just as well as it did before. didn't mention in the review of the original, but i love the idea of Naga. Anko can't have been the only person with some sort of connection to Orochimaru.

also, love the way that the village is dealt with when it comes to visitors. it had always kinda bugged me how visible konoha is considering that it is "the village HIDDEN in the leaves." great big gates with a giant road leading directly out of it...

meh. Kishimoto's world may be full of holes and slightly unexplained phenomena (the entire art of fuuinjutsu and just what the hell summons are, not to mention where they come from are my favorite examples) but that just makes things that much more fun to read here on fanfiction. sure, some things are pretty well standardized, but there's almost always some other fun theories/deviations to read up on.

anywho.. not really expecting updates, but one can always hope, eh?

thanks for writing as much as ye have. a well-written, unfinished story is still better than a complete piece of crap any day, and time spent on a good story is never time truly wasted.
Mmyself29 chapter 14 . 5/18/2011
awesome story, and i love Seichi's personalities, it makes him a very interesting character :)
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