Reviews for The Guardian in Spite of Herself
AngelForm chapter 15 . 3/4/2012
Its alive. Its Alive!

Moral questions for Naruto, always good to see. Just so long as it doesn’t end with Naruto giving some cliché speech and swearing he will change the world by never killing.
Vick chapter 15 . 3/4/2012
Aaarhg! Cliffhanger! :(

But a really good chapter! I love how natural all your characters are, all theire thoughts and lines just make sense. Thats a rather rare thing in the Naruto fandome i think. And I'm completely in love with all your OCs.
greed11 chapter 14 . 3/1/2012
yes, 8 months isn't nearly like 2.5 years. But 14 months IS getting up there...

Please continue SOMETHING.
shirokuromokona chapter 14 . 1/17/2012
This is truly one of the best AU stories of Naruto I have ever read. Although I favorite alot of stuff its more so I can track it later for reading, but if my favorite box was really for my few favorites this would definitely be in it. I loved it. I've also read the prequel which is the reason I'm here. This is really original to think of an apartment building manager to be a main character! Again thanks for the chapters.
potpourrie chapter 14 . 1/1/2012
i have to say, i really like the little touches you add in. there are certain teeny details that just add on to the great story you're telling. like having put in the fact that wearing veils seems to be part of grass-nin's "look," much like how face paint is a common decoration in suna. also the fact that the amane's use little sayings that would only make sense because they live in a port town.

these things just make me grin and chuckle a little, haha.
the.stories.live.on chapter 14 . 11/30/2011
I am very impressed with these two stories. Normally I hate OCs in fanfiction, but you have really made these interesting and realistic, and enjoyable. I especially love the interactions with Kakashi. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Yuuki no Yuki chapter 14 . 11/29/2011
Aww, Im up-to-date, that's so sad. I hope you update soon, and for the record while I enjoy switching back and forward between characters I feel that all interactions dealing with Eiji seem to drag, probably because I have no emmotional attachment to him or anyone he's interacting with...this series is re~ally interesting though, and I hope it gets a move on, its been nearly a year...I just want it to progress a bit.
Madame Minuit12 chapter 14 . 10/2/2011
iu didn't that there was a sequel to the way of an appartement manager, but this is wonderful :DDD

i enjoyed it a lot and i look forward to the next chapter!
lounger chapter 14 . 9/30/2011
nice chapter
ShirouHokuto chapter 14 . 9/5/2011
AHHHHHHHHH, I AM LOVING THIS FIC. ;o; ITACHI YOUR TERRIBLE FACE YOUR TERRIBLE PLANS YOUR TERRIBLE EVERYTHING oh Sasuke I know you hate hugs but I want to give you A LARGE NUMBER OF HUGS. Shut up and listen to Yukiko, okay, she's awesome. ;o; YUKIKO I WOULD LIKE TO MARRY YOU.

... Sasuke sticking leaves down Seichi's pants made my night AWESOME. Well, my very early morning awesome whoops I have stayed up really late reading your fic and that is at least 65% of why my comment is stupid and disjointed! ANYWAY I AM SUBSCRIBING GLEEFULLY and can't wait for more! Well, I mean, I CAN WAIT AS LONG AS NECESSARY but I'll definitely be looking forward to updates!
librarycat9 chapter 8 . 8/16/2011
I really don't want that family to die... :(
librarycat9 chapter 7 . 8/16/2011
If Itachi is the contact this could all get real dicey...
librarycat9 chapter 4 . 8/16/2011
this is not going to end well... but thats what happens when you eavesdrop. It's good that she isn't actually going after Itachi though...
librarycat9 chapter 3 . 8/16/2011
well shoot... that is a bit over the top. I hope Yukiko stays safe and gets a lot of info... she may even run into the pervert. lol :D I really like your writing style! :D
librarycat9 chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
I hope Danzou bastard doesn't get to Tsukime...
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