|Reviews for Californinja|
| Lord Sia chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Naruto... Trained by Xander... Post-Sunnydale Xander...
Wow. The Kyuubi doesn't have a pedophile's chance in hell?
(I have it on good authority the lover levels get pretty damn chilly, so the snowball analogy doesn't quite cut it. Pedophiles, on the other hand, well; imagine Hell being reality's biggest prison. And you know what happens to guy's like them in prison...)
| Nightgazer333 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Wow! This is great man, really! I'm glad Canis on TFF linked me to this!_
| Rubel chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Sweet. I hope to see more of this. Kick ass!
| Judah chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Good opener, but you need to give more setting background details. It makes the story stronger and breaks the constant dialogue. This is the case with most of your fics, especially in later chapters.
Oh yeah, legit writing feedback there!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
I like it.
| Bad Habits chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Yo. Liked this, and while I won't hold out much hope (or my breath) I'd really like to see this continued. I think it could be mucho fun, but as somebody trying to put together his own Naruto AU fic I understand just how daunting a task turning this into a series, however disjointed in terms of continuity, would be.
Still, it has stirred up a few plot bunnies in my mind such as a "What if Xander was Obito reincarnated?" Would be hella interesting, especially in the context of this particular fic.
| FairyQilan chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
ontinue! PLEASE? Pretty please with pornos on top?
| scythe195 chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Interesting. VERY interesting. Please continue this story! It's very good, and well written. Please consider writing more. :)
| Emma2 chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Er..interesting idea, but what knowledge about Konoha could Xander even have given or even known who the Hokage, if he had no idea who Naruto, the main character of the series, is?
| Salestia chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
| DerektheRogue chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Again please continue.
You didn't say that you wouldn't do THAT did you?
Just that there wouldn't be any sequals.
Derek The Rogue