Reviews for Hell Eyes
KitkatMoon chapter 1 . 7h
This Story was amazing
Sleepygirl68 chapter 53 . 10/6
I really enjoyed reading this story.
Taking out the "Harry Potter" story-line, this story is very entertaining on it's own.
This is exactly the kind of stories I like.
Great Job!
I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
666Neme666 chapter 53 . 10/4
Oh, wow... I'm... Well... Okay, I have no idea what to say. XD This story was just so perfect, I've read it in two days. I had to cancel the meeting with two of my friends but it was more than worth it. Somehow you've managed to create a whole new world, full of your own characters, and you've had us trapped in it so well that it didn't matter anymore that it barely had any connection to the HP universe. Really, if you removed the HP elements, replaced them with something else, I firmly believe that you could write a book, get it published, and have quite a few followers who would worship the ground you walk on. You are amazing. I'm quite picky in my choices of stories, as I can't stand it when the author has vastly inferior female characters, who are either mentally/physically weaker than any men, or are completely absent from the story. You had this balance here, as you had well-defined, complex characters, regardless of their gender. I think another reason why this story was so enjoyable is that you've built a whole universe with background and all, and focused on more than just the tiny ((LOL)) part where your story takes place. You had everything worked out, and it really showed. I had the urge the leave a review after every single chapter, and I'm sorry I didn't, I know you'd have liked it, but you know how it is: When you reach the end of a chapter and there's that little arrow that takes you to the next chapter, you just have to go, because HOLY SH- YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HERE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Also, it feels a bit strange, leaving messages at the middle of the story. Anyway. If you are interested in hearing more of my opinion on the story or the characters or anything, write back here and I can give you my Skype ID or my phone number so you can contact me through Whatsapp. Have a nice day, you perfect little mouse! :D
RTWilliams chapter 31 . 10/3
love it
cafeina chapter 43 . 10/1
I don't know if you still read the reviews, but in case you do... This is such an amazing and creative story! Somebody recommended it to me, and I'm captured by it!
Congrats for your great work! I haven't finished yet though!
Guest chapter 52 . 9/27
yea... true love.
Gawds, I'm a hopeless romantic...
.. and out of embrassment, I'm not going to sign the review this time.

Guest chapter 51 . 9/27
nice... that's where the story title comes from.

I still don't know how Aadon died
ironhair2 chapter 50 . 9/27
change 'sat down" to "slumped down senseless..".
ironhair2 chapter 49 . 9/27
wonder why intuition didn't save voldemort...
Ironhair2 chapter 47 . 9/27
where are the main gods... omniscient, they should know what's going on!
ironhair2 chapter 46 . 9/27
I dont dislike Lush
ironhair chapter 49 . 9/27
btw, I forgot to mention... RON killed Voldemort?
What happened to the prophecy?
ironhair chapter 53 . 9/27
I really want to know what happened to Lush and harry.. you know, after Enna passes away.

ironhair chapter 1 . 9/27
read this fic. Tough start, but if you get past 10 chapters, you'll love it.
ironhair chapter 50 . 9/27

What a twist. Intuition being driven crazy because of the screams of dead ppl 'praying' to her.
Very believable back story.

How did Aadon die?

change 'sat down" to "slumped down senseless..".

Awesome story, but felt you were tiring towards the end.
Nonetheless, thank you ever so much for continuing to write and completing this story.
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