Reviews for Hell Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wild ride and very enjoyable. The world of Origin and their Gods was really interesting and it was very obvious the level of thought and care put into the lore and history of it/them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a good read, I'm glad I stuck with it especially after I realized it was almost all OCs. You are a great writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Escaped just in time! I wonder what all of Harry's friends are going to think about this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not that surprised that Enna jumped to that conclusion, although she really should've given Harry a chance to explain himself. I'm also not surprised that Harry kept it a secret, since I've heard it's very hard to tell people something like that happened to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit, I was NOT expecting the wizards to show up there, but I guess it makes a lot of sense that they'd be with the Origin humans. This story is nuts with all the world building, it definitely unlike any other Harry Potter fanfiction I've read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be completely honest, I'm probably not gonna keep reading this, but I DO appreciate the realist approach being taken. I may not like the societal gaslighting and abuse of Cursed Silent, but it is definitely something that would happen in real life. Good job. And the story itself is great as well, but I have a bit of a problem with what Harry's going through in it, so no more for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful story thank you for writing this:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally thought the secret she didn't tell him was that she was pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for an amazing, unique story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. There are so few original Harry Potter fics out there, and even fewer good Creature!Harry fics, and I am so so SO happy to be reading this now, you have no idea! Also, it almost crushed me when Harry got sunsickness, then I realized that there was no way there were twenty more chapters to go and he was dead, so... I may have skipped down in the chapter a little just to confirm so I could get myself through the rest of the text in the meantime. Also just double-checked to make sure this fic was complete and oh my word, you are divine. |
![]() ![]() You know, fuck Lily and fuck James for abandoning their son. Shitty lying-ass'd parents. |
![]() ![]() Where the hell is the context? I mean,.. what? This literally makes no sense, and with the chapters being so short it's hard to read into anything written. If anything it feels like a brainstormed story that was heaped together in a rush. From the three chapters I've read,... I've assertained that only the name Harry, Dumbledoor, James and Lily are from Harry Potter. The rest is a plot for your attempt at writing a book. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter of world building, I like how you develop your fic's mythology |
![]() ![]() ![]() This writing style reminds me strangely of a good fantasy french author, Pierre Bottero. I think I'm gonna like this fic, as he was my favorite author |
![]() ![]() I've gotta say this blew me away. This is definitely one of those fics that I could see published if you removed the Harry Potter elements. It's just that good and amazingly original. Thank you for all your effort. |