|Reviews for Hell Eyes|
| ironhair chapter 25 . 9/26/2015
Very interesting and well written... So many of did make it a bit of a rough ride, but it's getting better now.
| sirch chapter 38 . 9/20/2015
This story has been a pleasure to read and something different than all of the copycat stories about anything HP. You have done a great job and it is an easy read.
| LadiesMan218 chapter 53 . 9/17/2015
Is the planet Origin and all its inhabitants yours? Like original? If so then I would totally suggest and even encourage you to publish a story about it! Loved the story and hope you continue doing a great job writing!
| Narsil Shards chapter 53 . 9/16/2015
I'll be honest, I wasn't expecting much out of this story. To me, the plot was stale at the beginning, but I decided to keep reading and give it a shot and if I didn't like it by chapter 15 I would stop. It was around chapter 10 that I started getting into the story. You have a way of conveying a story to the reader that is very compelling. Like I said before, the story seemed stale, but I think that you were able to get into a good rhythm that makes the reader want to continue to read. This was a wonderful story that I would recommend to a lot of people that would appreciate the story.
I can't decide what my favorite chapter was, however it is between "Welcome to Hell" and "Hell Eyes". Both of these chapter were very well done and were able to convey image very well to me.
I started this story a little less than 24 hours ago, but I know that I want to read it again the future and will take my with it.
I hope you're still writing, whether it's fanfiction or your own stories, your stories are a work of art.
| Smartiepants007 chapter 53 . 9/10/2015
I can't say I have a favourite chapter, but your story is amazing full stop! I have a habit of getting bored half way into fanfictions sometimes, but yours just kept on pulling me in deeper and introducing fabulous plot twists whenever I thought I was getting predictable. You are a truly marvellous author :)
I don't suppose you've thought about or have actually published any books? Because if this is anything to go by I'd love to read them!
A million thanks for sharing this story with us :) x
| Joe chapter 53 . 8/16/2015
I am amazed at the world you have built around the Harry potter universe!
At first i thought it was straying too fast from the original harry potter world, but the fact that we know just as much as harry and are discovering this "new" world with him makes the mystery very appealing.
If it hasn't been suggested to you yet, I suggest trying to remove the harry potter elements of this world you've built (of which there are few to be honest) and try to make a standalone story of it.
This has been an amazing fanfic! thanks for the experience. Joe
| The Whimsical Ermine chapter 44 . 8/10/2015
This is totally awesome and should be it's own book
| Peanut-Butter-Bandit chapter 53 . 8/4/2015
Favorite chapter? Oh gosh. How do I pick? I really love how you tied things up here, well, mostly tied them up. I think my favorite chapter is probably the one where ... I was going to say where Harry made his planet, but then there's also the chapter where Lush nearly dies and then when Harry fights Intuition head on and then this chapter... I just really enjoyed the entire thing. I'm glad that Harry ends up with Enna here, because I wanted them to have a chance. I do still want Lush to have a chance as well, but like Lush mentions, she'll be there after Enna's gone. So I think Harry should spend time with Enna while he can and then see where it could go with Lush maybe.
| Peanut-Butter-Bandit chapter 31 . 8/3/2015
I found this story only recently, so sadly can't help in the past with reviews. I did want you to know I really like your writing. The trouble sometimes with very powerful characters is that things can seem too easy for them, but you've written it so that it's still compelling and a battle. I really like it. Very excited to see where the remaining chapters go!
| Master-Ant chapter 53 . 7/5/2015
I greatly enjoyed your story, I am highly impressed with the universe you created for it. Makes me wonder if you ever considered publishing it as an original story. After all Harry is pretty much your own character by end of it, bar his life on earth.
The start of the story is very slow and confusing and I think that Harry's unwillingness to try to fit in with silent society hurts the story in the beginning, but you make it work.
I really liked your take on the soul-bond theme. Both because of the friction it creates between Harry and Enna and because of its nature as essentially the god's gift to make up for the god's mistakes (the mind problem's of healers and portal guides).
I also enjoyed the universe you created, we don't really learn much about the different races (a little bit about the silents and the humans), but what we do learn is consistent and works well together.
The epilogue is more of an advertisement of the sequel than an actual epilogue, but if the sequel exists it's not that big of a deal (more on that in a review to be posted on Cursed Beauty).
Other than that I enjoyed your writing style and formatting of the text, Good Work!
Oh, my favorite chapter is probably 44: truth and sacrifice, as it marks the beginning of the last arc with a bang and leaves us to speculate whether Enna dies and Harry ends up with Lush as a god, or if she survives and Harry stays with her.
| Simianpower chapter 3 . 6/2/2015
Too confusing, and for no reason other than the author playing "I know something you don't". Bored now. The reviews are mostly good, but you don't draw in the audience by playing games. I usually give a story 3-4 chapters to get interesting, and this one failed that test.
| Yve982 chapter 18 . 5/30/2015
| Dcreature chapter 53 . 4/14/2015
Thank you for this awesome story!
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/31/2015
It is a good story. You threw me for a loop in hapter31
| erbkaiser - closed account chapter 53 . 3/24/2015
Really good story. Completely AU of course, but you created an internally consistent and interesting universe complete with its own theology.
I liked the parts where Harry first learned he was a (demi)god the most, the conflict between his mortal side and the new one, which was already started when he found out he was Silent, was increased and it really strengthened his character.
Thank you for sharing your story.