Reviews for To Fight The Coming Darkness
blcoachmac chapter 17 . 4/11
Use what Penelope gave, change the other stuff she reported, and get Luna home!
blcoachmac chapter 16 . 4/11
Whoa! That was brilliant! Great use of bait and switch!
blcoachmac chapter 14 . 4/10
Great Chapter! Setting the stage for the mayhem to come!
blcoachmac chapter 13 . 4/10
Harry might finally have some decent help. Gary also needs his friends to either step up or step out. by using half of his power to protect his mind Harry May learn that that's the power that he knows not he might be more powerful than Voldemort already
blcoachmac chapter 12 . 4/10
Jim I don't know how you do it but you keep writing every freaking chapter absolutely the way it should be done at some point give Harry a power up or something to level to play until and getting the vampires to turn on Voldemort was a good twist
blcoachmac chapter 11 . 4/10
this night is showing Harry exactly what he's going to have to do to finish this war no mercy no quarter kill or be killed you're either in or get the hell out of the way he's got to learn he's got to get stronger he's got to have dedicated people behind us back willing to do whatever it takes!
blcoachmac chapter 9 . 4/10
Voldemort is doing a hell of a job of pissing off Harry when Harry goes on the offensive he's not going to take any presents he'll kill everyone up which he should do but he does need a boost in power hopefully you'll give him that in some way shape or form
blcoachmac chapter 9 . 4/10
that was a hell of a chapter! if Harry is truly voldemort's equal then every time Baltimore gets a power up then so does Harry not sure I understand it yet but it's a great plot. Harry needs a strong support system around him and people he can trust he can't trust Dumbledore most of the weasley's any damn sure can't trust her money now
blcoachmac chapter 8 . 4/10
Love it!
blcoachmac chapter 6 . 4/9
Harry Potter needs to be more independent and remove all obstacles from the playing field!
blcoachmac chapter 5 . 4/9
Dang you killing off alot be of people!
blcoachmac chapter 4 . 4/9
as I said after chapter 1 Harry has to be at least as powerful as Voldemort!
blcoachmac chapter 3 . 4/9
excellent job! Dumbledore's I am always right attitude irks me to no end!
blcoachmac chapter 2 . 4/9
Harry has to. be at least as powerful as Voldemort! If Dumbledore is as manipulative as usual then kill him quick!
blcoachmac chapter 1 . 4/9
Great start!
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