great job! Thanks a lot for all your effort! A nice reading.

Amazing story full of gritty realism. Your portrayal of Voldemort is perfect, it depicts him as both human but leagues above the others perfectly. I only wonder how I didn't come across this sooner

Yeah I agree, Molly needed to die.

Neville makes an excellent opponent for Draco

Ginny is a great target. Mind you, Neville kind of had this coming. I like him tough, but he was getting out of hand.

I can't stand Hermione, and it really irritates me that she gets away with everything she does.

I love the new Neville

Very nice

Nice to see Dumbledore can actually stand to see someone killed.

I have never liked Lily Potter.

Good to see Ginny get what she deserves. She is awful

Percy is a wanker and nobody likes him, that's why nobody cares if he dies.
He's supposed to be smart, he's all about the rules, yet he doesn't even acknowledge that he harboured a criminal for 9? Years. Never occurred to him that it could be an animagus. Took no responsibility for his role in helping destroy Sirius Black's life. And Harry Potter's. Percy sucks. And so do his parents, for the same reason.

I love the way you deal with the sneak jinx. Hermione Granger is a terrible character.

I don't believe Dumbledore has the capacity to honestly question his own beliefs, conclusions or behaviour. He might be willing to - at least appear to - empathize with people who have suffered as a result of his actions and decisions, but that doesn't mean he thinks he was wrong.

You just had me until you included my least favourite feature of HP fanfics. The weird pureblood culture bullshit.