Great start!

If you're going to have Susan Bones mom alive why not give Harry his mom?

Unrealistic actions in public.

Stupid Harry, 100 THOUSAND!

Do you even try to get their names right?

KILL THEM ALL

Inferi.

Fantastic fic as always.

Rofl uuuuuuh so dangerous and scary xD

Ending sucked and everyone died for nothing. It’s like you just wrote stuff just because it sounded ‘cool’ and explained nothing.

Wow. And so everyone in this story died for nothing. What a waste. Should be a final chapter where all of Harry's children are tortured to death in front of ruler of the world Voldimort just to keep the story consistent. Thank God I skipped through this fucker real fast to confirm it's one of those nihilistic stories. Very skilled writing though, so there is that.

I enjoyed viewing your idea of one of Alice and Frank’s defying moments of TR/LV and his ilk. Is a pale lavender spell a neck bone breaker curse or perhaps Longbottom family magic? Seems a quick decisive light style of killing magic. Kali

Interesting take on the “Susan as the love interest”, and especially with Harry’s entrance into her life…

I think that a lot of people could see Neville turning dark like this, considering everything that we’ve seen as a society, from Columbine to the south Florida shootings, and if you push someone the worst way at the wrong time, then I could easily see it, and even root for him in an anti hero kind of way…

why do u write harry as a nutless wonder

This is all over the place, and the conversations are lackluster at best. dropped