Reviews for To Fight The Coming Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() If you're going to have Susan Bones mom alive why not give Harry his mom? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unrealistic actions in public. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid Harry, 100 THOUSAND! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you even try to get their names right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() KILL THEM ALL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inferi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic fic as always. |
![]() ![]() Rofl uuuuuuh so dangerous and scary xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ending sucked and everyone died for nothing. It’s like you just wrote stuff just because it sounded ‘cool’ and explained nothing. |
![]() ![]() Wow. And so everyone in this story died for nothing. What a waste. Should be a final chapter where all of Harry's children are tortured to death in front of ruler of the world Voldimort just to keep the story consistent. Thank God I skipped through this fucker real fast to confirm it's one of those nihilistic stories. Very skilled writing though, so there is that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed viewing your idea of one of Alice and Frank’s defying moments of TR/LV and his ilk. Is a pale lavender spell a neck bone breaker curse or perhaps Longbottom family magic? Seems a quick decisive light style of killing magic. Kali |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting take on the “Susan as the love interest”, and especially with Harry’s entrance into her life… I think that a lot of people could see Neville turning dark like this, considering everything that we’ve seen as a society, from Columbine to the south Florida shootings, and if you push someone the worst way at the wrong time, then I could easily see it, and even root for him in an anti hero kind of way… |
![]() ![]() why do u write harry as a nutless wonder |
![]() ![]() This is all over the place, and the conversations are lackluster at best. dropped |