Reviews for Laid Low by Achilles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Grins. I like a sick Sammy. I love a protective Dean. Very nicely done. I loved Dean checking on Sammy and Sammy finally realizing that scared Dean and angry Dean have similar looks. I thoroughly enjoyed the romp. Though I admit I thought the bite had caused the problem... Sam's right in that they don't get sick often. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad it's just the flu, and interesting thought of fear Dean is the same look as mad Dean. And Dean reminds him of Mom. Loving that. Plus the whole "let's try everything" bullets. Smartest ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. Great H/C without being schmaltzy. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrific story. |
![]() ![]() That last line is amazing. I love this story! So glad I finally stumbled across it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Perfect. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Someone finally gives him a shot in the ass that eases the nausea and Sam sleeps. BEST LINE EVER idk i just really loved that line lol made me laugh for ages |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really awesome. I love your characterization and the style and word choices were great and the conversation felt like it could come right out of an episode. Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. A true gem of story between the boys. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() Aww Dean * hugs him* and poor sick Sammy * settles for basically petting his head since he's laying down* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww...your last line was adorable. Hope that is ok to say! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. (This review is about 5 years too late since I believe I read this story when it was first written.) So many people write Dean as dumb. Even the writers of the show have caved to that particularly irritating characterization from time to time. It always bothers me because not being 'book smart' does not equate being stupid. Ever. Anyway, before this turns into a rant rather than a review, I'll get to my point. I love that this story is told in present tense. I feel that present tense pulls the reader much more into the action of the story. I also know that it is much HARDER to do than most people think. Good work (as always) and thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love this. So sweet and the ending line just wrapped around my heart like love. Such a a great insight into the boys, and Sam being bitten and Dean being scared. Superb. I really enjoyed this so much. sid |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great little fic. Awesome dose of injured and sick Sam and Dean in full big brother mode. Could imagine it playing out in my head as I read, and so in character. Perfect ending - He's halfway asleep when Dean adds softly, "It reminds me of Mom." Nothing reminds Sam of his mother. Dean turns off the light by the bed even though it's midday, and briefly, very briefly, lays his hand on Sam's forehead again before settling into the far chair with a book on demons. Sam closes his eyes and realizes that it's not true that nothing reminds him of his mother. A great read thanks, just sorry it took almost four years to read it! |