|Reviews for Anakin|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
Good rhyming in this "poem" but anakin is an ass cause he dispatched count dooku
And padme is actually in love with me and she is literally sleeping with me right now
And let's not go into details. :)
Roses are red violets are blue nobody cares mate so shame on you noob
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
This definitely tells the prequel trilogy of the story of Anakin Skywalker, and in the right tone that belongs with "Star Wars" itself.
I did find some grammatical mistakes. In the first line, "feel" should be spelt instead as "felt". In the line, "Now their married", the "their" should be spelt out "they are". After the line about Count Dooku, the "Cause" should be "Because", but that's my opinion and I think it sounds better that way. In the line, "As it's plain to see", unless the "it's" was spelt like this on purpose, the word "it's" should be better said as "it is".
Otherwise, this was a well-written poem, which I will favorite.
| BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
A great poem fic. Very good.
| vesxo chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Did you actually write that? Because if you did you're amazing at writing poetry.
| Hatori's Melted Snow chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
very beautiful. of course, the perfect poem to describe their relationship
| alhmo3224 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
this is kinda awesome. i like the rhyme.
| Alley Parker chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
Wow a beautiful poem! And it rhynms too! Great job :)