|Reviews for Real|
| Basched chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I really enjoyed this fic. You've written a great little masterpiece here! It fits so perfectly for the characters. :)
| gena chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
that was amazingly touching...
i actually almost cried
| anonymous chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
very beautifully written
| Azamiko chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
| Hafthand chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
This was really good. I enjoyed the writing style and the idea of Jayne making her real. You should follow it up with a story where the process is complete and he has no choice but to see her for who she is! Anyway, great story!
| slaygirl chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
I loved this. I kind of hope you write a sequel, but it really works great as a stand alone. You need to write more because you have a way with words. It was very beautifully written, it made my day thanks :)