Reviews for A Balanced Account
weartheseshorts chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I absolutely loved this little bit. It was well-done, completely IC, fitting with the story, and so cute to imagine them meeting as younger teens! Obviously they didn't, or didn't think to, remember this, but that last thought pulled everything together to connect to the story in the future so perfectly, that I think it *made* this story. I loved it so much, I couldn't help but read it twice. Definitely going to my favorites. Well done!

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aka Pauline
celticfox chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Nice. Very nice. Completly true to the characters. :)
Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
That was great :) Great action scenes and a good background story for them. All around, well done. Great job!
Timeless Traveler chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
That was short but funny. Good work.
DarkChocolate21 chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
sabrina: :) i like this story! i think you portrayed the characters as their young counterparts very good! well done!
burn to ashe chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Very nice piece. Beautiful. I love the last thought.
Mean Man chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Ooh, well written yumyness. To bad it's so short.
Writer of Dreams chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
This was great! I loved the theory of them meeting before and him being the cause of her being a thief-catcher. The only problem was that the first time Varden had been caught steeling was by Acheron, not lei'ella. But this was still a great one-shot!