Reviews for Roots
FrequencyQueen chapter 19 . 1/2/2006
Zel pouts a lot doesn't he? Maybe he needs an attitude adjustment. Good story!
Indigo Tantarian chapter 19 . 12/31/2005
Aww, so cute... And nice lip-dive by Sylphiel.

...And I love Zelgadis' thought, about not being a sponge. Wonderful!

...Heh, good to hear the aka houshi's wearing pants for a change. _

So as a final thought, this story was very enjoyable, and well-written! Way to go!
Hitteh Pitteh chapter 19 . 12/31/2005
The ending was perfect. I can't think of any way this could have been ended better.

This was a really great fanfic; I enjoyed every chapter of it. I look forward to the next fanfic you write.
Hitteh Pitteh chapter 18 . 12/30/2005
Ha ha ha! No really. The OOC joke was FUNNY. I could totally see it happening...

Anyways, I went on vacation so I couldn't read this chapter until, like, two days after it came out. Bwa... So Rasmus is finally back with Sylphiel and all of his other friends? Yay!

Oh! Update soon, please?
FrequencyQueen chapter 18 . 12/30/2005
I do NOT have a wierd sense of humor! (Mom sticks tongue out and blow raspberry) Nice save on Rasmus.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 18 . 12/28/2005
YES! Excellent! Much happiness for Rasmus, and it pleases me. _ I look forward to the next chapter very much!
FrequencyQueen chapter 17 . 12/27/2005
You sure did write a bleak and nasty Hell - good job. Rasmus doesn't belong there though so I hope you let him out.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 17 . 12/25/2005
Hmm... I'm glad Eris got to meet up with Rezo again. She isn't all bad, even if she was pretty bad by the time any of us saw her. Rasmus, on the other hand, has some rising from the dead to do!
Hitteh Pitteh chapter 17 . 12/25/2005
So, Rasmus is REALLY dead, since he went to Hell. Aw...poor guy...

AND poor Sylphiel...

How will they both get by without each other?

This was a sad chapter. But accurate as well. I think it perfectly described how a meeting with Rezo, Eris and Rasmus would go.

I'm really looking forward to more.

Merry Christmas!
Eternal Wanderer chapter 16 . 12/24/2005
Interesting Story it reminds me of a couple other fan works. One is a fanfic called "A flower whose name I don't know yet" which is a story from before I joined The store has been complete for at least 6 years. I have no idea where it can be found on the web now.

And also a fan manga called "A copies dream".

Anyways, this is a good story. You've got the emotions, maybe more time could be spent describing them. That might be a question of style though.

Kind of an evil cliffhanger you've left this last chapter on. Did he really die? Will Flagoon save him somehow? Etc...
Hitteh Pitteh chapter 16 . 12/23/2005

Rasmus isn't REALLY dead, is he? He'd better not be!


This chapter was violent and sad.

I NEED to know what happens next. It isn't fair to leave people at such evil cliffhangers. It's... it's... UNJUST! So update soon.

Oh, yeah- You do battle scenes really well...
Indigo Tantarian chapter 16 . 12/23/2005
Wow... I know it'll turn out all right somehow (at least I assume so), but that's looking pretty sad...
FrequencyQueen chapter 16 . 12/23/2005
Uh Oh...bad news. Rasmus bites dirt, Sylphiel a hostage of her own conscience, Lina out of the game...looks bad. Where's Xellos when you need him?
FrequencyQueen chapter 14 . 12/23/2005
Lina wants to mellow out? Cool! She showed a lot of maturity in this chapter...that is sure to confuse Gourry!
FrequencyQueen chapter 15 . 12/23/2005
Rasmus can be kind when he wants to be. Its funny about all the girls hitting on him too!
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