Reviews for Elfenmärchen
Mars chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
7 years old and having this conversation, you should be ashamed of yourself. I'm hoping you were like 12 when you wrote this.
Mars chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
""…pink hair …green eyes …" the girl said slowly, her eyes never left Sakura's face. "…you are Haruno… Sakura, aren't you? Godaime-sama's apprentice. Naruto-jichan's long time crush…"

Naruto stiffened.

"…and my Father's first and only love." " Children giving away the plot/situation in 3 seconds flat is lame! C'mon, you can do better than that. It's so overused in disney movies! The little kids always saying something awkward the parents are thinking in that cutsy innocent voice, wahhh. Disgusting.
MARS chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I like it, but the ending was so cheesy. I almost gagged DX
Asdfghjkl chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS. omg, I love love love this (:
Jxif chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
xprezurself chapter 4 . 11/4/2010
wow this story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! please update soon! XD
Rotten-Ivy chapter 4 . 10/27/2010
Damn! its goood!

i felt the intense feelings too! oh come on , you better keep update .

didnt turn out good , if you kept the ghost wondering around coz your story!

love ,

ahhhhhh chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
i really wish for you to continue this. it has been about two years already. i understand the immense dificulty that comes with, when writing a story but please, udpate. i am begging you. you have a great plot and well rounded characters already. so please, out of the kindness in your heart, go on and continue - write your heart out. if not for yourself than for us, your faithful (dying of anticipation), loyal readers. please please please with a cherry on tops!
Bibliolympian chapter 3 . 8/30/2010
I'm crying. Small tears, barely visible-but still there.
Deploringly chapter 4 . 6/18/2010
This is a wonderful fic, i genuinely hope yu update it sometime soon. :)
Deploringly chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
HOLAYFLUUCKLAJDSLGKJADS. That was real fuckin' cute. -heartheart-
Hazel817 chapter 4 . 5/2/2010
WTF! SO DARK! UPDATE PLEASE! The suspense is killing me!:)
rida chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Simply magical. It shocks me, it makes me think, cry, smile. Absolutely amazing.
rina.chanxx chapter 4 . 4/11/2010
I dont get this, its very confusing.
pc chapter 4 . 1/9/2010
Will Naruto take his everything from him? Ah. He had no everything. How could he lose something that never became his in the first place?

that was powerful. it moved something inside of me. this story is amazing... all of yours aree! honestly i dont knwo how u do it.
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