Reviews for Elfenmärchen
DD chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
omg is that it?


i really liked it.

this is my second time reading it, because i like it AANNDD i was hoping that you wouldve added more chapters to it


good job with the fanfiction:D
O chapter 4 . 12/7/2009

is that it?

feisu-chan chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
aw.. Naruto...

i'm a big sasusaku fan, but my heart just went to Naruto... m... i'll give Naruto-kun a big, big, big hug!

please update soon, k? love your stories! keeps me all XD all day...
ThatAutumnNight chapter 4 . 11/25/2009
A friend of mine made me read this and there were parts of your story that sent goosebumps all over my body and parts when utter relief washed over my body.

I love your work.

Bravo, bravo. :)
moonlit starry sky chapter 3 . 11/19/2009
OMG Naruto's a bastard now O.O

omg cliff hanger. Must know what happens in Naru Hina! Will die without O.O
shelly chapter 4 . 10/13/2009
I love your stories, and your writing is amazing. I don't like naruto being mean to hinata though, cheer him up.
unearthing chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
This story is absolutely fantastic. I do hope you haven't given up on it.
itachi iz meh Bitch chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
You are THE best writer ever!

I can't stop loving EVERYTHING you write!

it's so sad and...your such a trickster ya'know that?

it's a good talent so please please PRETTY please update.

I love your story.
ella chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
i dont understand how people can read this without being put off by the style of your sentences and paragraphs. no offense, really, it's nothing personal. i mean, your plots are usually gold, but the context...your syntax needs work. you need to maybe concentrate on the little things (grammar and flow, specifically) that make fanfics wonderful.

work on that please. i'd really like to read something of yours without cringing at the amateur-ish kind of writing you never seem to fail to dish out.
tcl7189 chapter 4 . 4/27/2009
Deep deep story...hope to see a new chapter soon...
Immortalfantasylover chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Uh huh! I am awesome! I totally knew it was Hinata. Please update soon1
neko-koo chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
rikary chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
i like ur stories


i wish you would update and finish them off



pls update /endless/watever
Akai Jigoku Hana chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
I luved it. . Update soon.

shika'sgurl22 chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
Sorry it took so long to review. I really like this story and I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great work and update soon!
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