Reviews for Elfenmärchen
shelly chapter 4 . 10/13/2009
I love your stories, and your writing is amazing. I don't like naruto being mean to hinata though, cheer him up.
unearthing chapter 4 . 9/24/2009
This story is absolutely fantastic. I do hope you haven't given up on it.
itachi iz meh Bitch chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
You are THE best writer ever!

I can't stop loving EVERYTHING you write!

it's so sad and...your such a trickster ya'know that?

it's a good talent so please please PRETTY please update.

I love your story.
ella chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
i dont understand how people can read this without being put off by the style of your sentences and paragraphs. no offense, really, it's nothing personal. i mean, your plots are usually gold, but the context...your syntax needs work. you need to maybe concentrate on the little things (grammar and flow, specifically) that make fanfics wonderful.

work on that please. i'd really like to read something of yours without cringing at the amateur-ish kind of writing you never seem to fail to dish out.
tcl7189 chapter 4 . 4/27/2009
Deep deep story...hope to see a new chapter soon...
Immortalfantasylover chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Uh huh! I am awesome! I totally knew it was Hinata. Please update soon1
neko-koo chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Woah...
rikary chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
i like ur stories

but...

i wish you would update and finish them off

x]

p.s.

pls update /endless/watever
Akai Jigoku Hana chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
I luved it. . Update soon.

AJH
shika'sgurl22 chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
Sorry it took so long to review. I really like this story and I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great work and update soon!
suka uchiha chapter 4 . 1/2/2009
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!

PLZ PRETTY PLZ!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

ITS SO INTERESTING!
suka uchiha chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
love this stroy!
sasusaku74 chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
oh dear

i totally saw that coming!

i knew it!

but i have no idea what coming next so if you

would

PLEASE

update soon

i would be so

happy lol

i love this story-good job
KuroAngelique chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
*cry*

Your story always leave a deep impression to me, either it was a content one, or just incredibly sad...

You always seemed to pull out different emotions towards me:)

I love the way you use a plot where the one who leaves isn't Sasuke but Sakura:)

I love the way you describe their feelings, a lot.

One of the sentence in this fic struck me a lot..

; How could one be sad, if they don't understand the meaning of sadness?

I have said that sentence once to myself;

infact, I have a full collection of those realted sentences;

How could one smile, if they don't undertand the meaning of happiness?

How could one be mad, if they don't understand the meaning of anger?

How could one hate, if they don't understand the meaning of hatred?

And... how could one love, if they don't understand the meaning of love?

All of this sentences are all have been used by me in daily life:)

I enjoy this fic truly and I shall be awaiting for your next update,

until next time, Happy Holidays.
nizzzybear chapter 4 . 12/24/2008
update please ;D
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