Reviews for Revenge
evilraptor chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
awesome story, loved the plot and everything. you should definitely keep writing this story. awesome cliffhanger, if you do make a next chapter it will be as good as this one. AWESOME!

P.S: just a bit of work on the grammar, 'coz sometimes it got a bit confusing.
firzen lover chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
HEY! AWESOME!

keep on writing
myirga chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
its okay so far... i'm just wondering why Davis and Dennis are acting like they're weaker than Henry. Davis especially is a really powerful guy. He should've been able to take down a bunch of hunters and bandits easily lol...

good job so far though. Keep it going, don't stop.. I'm curious to see how the story ends
Sith Worshipper chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Keep it up plz! All the little fighter 2 sotries haven't been updated at all!
JTurner chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Hello blacksyth. I remember seeing a flash movie of the little fighters but I've never played the game. Is this your first story? If so I think you are off to a very nice start. The story is easy to read and follow so you're doing well. Keep up the good work.