Reviews for Their Story
Hinata-hime chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
It'll be interesting to see how you continue it. Cute start though!
Jade R. Raven chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
aw! That was so cute! I love it!

Can't wait for more,and I like this narrative, its original and really sets the mood. :) awesome job!
matchynishi chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
lol! Awesome beginning! And do continue in this narrative style. It's different - and hilarious. :p
Meow Mix Meow Mix chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
I came as soon as I found your review reply saying that you were posting another InoShika piece!

LE GASP! Continue this story NOW! That was so cute~! I love it, especially how funny the fathers were, and I LOVED the part (that ever so fluffy, even for little babies, part)where Shikamaru made Ino stop crying, being so sweet!

I love it, UPDATE NOW! *Fangs* If you don't, I'll hunt you down and (reluctantly) FLAME every one of your stories!

Much love


PS. I like this style, you should use it again.
Avanichan chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Wow I am in love with the detail in this story, I say you should keep going with this...I'll give you a cookie!

*waves cookie in face*

You know you want it! XD
SkyblueSunshine chapter 1 . 12/4/2005

well written

Although I did expect it to go a bit furthur from them being just babies. really like the idea of what kind of atmosphere was created from the lives of killing machines. Argh. I loved your itachi/hinata story *mumbles*

The ending was*growls*

Even though it wouldn't have been better any other way.
lynzee chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
wow i really liked it your a very good writer! -lynzee :) )
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