|Reviews for Their Story|
| Hinata-hime chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
It'll be interesting to see how you continue it. Cute start though!
| Jade R. Raven chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
aw! That was so cute! I love it!
Can't wait for more,and I like this narrative, its original and really sets the mood. :) awesome job!
| matchynishi chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
lol! Awesome beginning! And do continue in this narrative style. It's different - and hilarious. :p
| Meow Mix Meow Mix chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
I came as soon as I found your review reply saying that you were posting another InoShika piece!
LE GASP! Continue this story NOW! That was so cute~! I love it, especially how funny the fathers were, and I LOVED the part (that ever so fluffy, even for little babies, part)where Shikamaru made Ino stop crying, being so sweet!
I love it, UPDATE NOW! *Fangs* If you don't, I'll hunt you down and (reluctantly) FLAME every one of your stories!
PS. I like this style, you should use it again.
| Avanichan chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Wow I am in love with the detail in this story, I say you should keep going with this...I'll give you a cookie!
*waves cookie in face*
You know you want it! XD
| SkyblueSunshine chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Although I did expect it to go a bit furthur from them being just babies.
Um..hm..I really like the idea of what kind of atmosphere was created from the lives of killing machines. Argh. I loved your itachi/hinata story *mumbles*
The ending was so..so..*growls*
Even though it wouldn't have been better any other way.
| lynzee chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
wow i really liked it your a very good writer! -lynzee :) )