|Reviews for Penelope's end|
| WolvesRock14 chapter 1 . 1/31
O_O I can't help but feel sorry for Penelope here. And be pretty freaking scared of Paloma.
| Gracekim1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
that's so cool! plz write another one!
| The Time Traveler chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Hmm, Cory for the time it aired, this was an interesting way of looking at it. Nice job!
| MikariStar chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Interesting theory. I liked that part where Paloma shows Duncan her real eyes in that episode but I didn't think of her as a villain. But that's what fanfiction is for anything can happen. Are you going to continue this when Betty goes to the sleep over? It's nice to see more people writing in this section. :)
| Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Quite gruesome, 'MOJOJOJO22'! I didn't expect Penelope to end up sliced and diced by Paloma...she may be snotty and uncaring, but there's SOME good in Ms. Lang (where it is, I'm not sure...)-she really didn't deserve this vicious attack...but what about the moment when BETTY finds out what Paloma really is? Will there be a battle royale until one of them is dead? Might make a interesting story...;)
| SP Action Extreme 2 Noid chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
This was a great story, short but good, I'm impressed, and very dark as well, the part on Penelope's body was the best. I should start reading again, this was great, keep it up Cory