Reviews for White Light
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Awesome i wosh u could make another like this one
BlueSakuraAC chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Cute
HeartKnowsMore26 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Very Good!
The Laughing Fool chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I like the way that you included several different characters into your one-shot- it's always nice to see people represent ;). I also really enjoy the idea of everyone hanging out in a non-mission-related setting. It's fun and I like reading about it.

Just a couple of things to note: your writing style is pretty choppy and there isn't really a comprehensive flow to it most of the time.

When reading your work, I noticed a lot of tense-switching, to the point where I wonder if you are actually a native English speaker. I recommend finding a good beta; they are ESSENTIAL for writers who want to post work of varying levels of difficulty and it's always fun to learn grammar and writing mistakes so when you try again with a new piece, it's better than it was before.

Just putting it out there and have a nice day-

-LF
bmnbmnb chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! How kawaiie! (I can't spell that right, ARRRRGGHH!)
xmysteriousunknownx chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
COOL SWEET CUTE AWESOME! :D :D :D :D DO A SEQUEL! :D i love it1 (: your such an amazing writer!
Leafless chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Good. :)
adiosToredor chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
LOVE it i like the idea . i had ino not like sasuke anymore in my story too!:)
SASUsaku - 4 Ever chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!SAsusakuSAsusakuSAsusaku...

*dies*Really good story!LOVE IT! ._. ( - loves this face)

Sakura,don't worry Sasuke-kun Will ALWAYS love you! )Great story.

Bye,bye

SASUsaku - 4 Ever
The Angel Of Ruin chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
AW THAT WAS SOO CUTE REALLY LIKED IT ALOT! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER MAYBE HALLOWEEN!1
poket chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Oh that was beautiful :) hehe

don't delete it!
Tiger Priestess chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
This was a cute Christmas fic.
TheMuffinThatWentTooFar chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
it's in my favourites. what does that say? it says this was awesome and that is just has to stat. or else...
sakura chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
good
HermioneSakuraGardner07 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
meep!super kawaii!loved it
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