Reviews for Dangerous Ground
Guest chapter 34 . 1/14/2014
I laughed when Katara thanked Aang at the end here, because since Zuko defeated Ozai and Katara defeated Azula, Aang was pretty useless in this war. Why is she thanking him?
ily chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Sorry. I wanted to write I love you in the name thing but it was too long.

I worship the ground you walk on.

Seriously... Please please pleeeaseeee write more?

I nearly combusted reading this. It's my fifth time.

I LOVE YOU

(Sorry for sounding creepy)
ZutarianLove chapter 36 . 11/29/2013
loved it! plz keep writing!
Pikku-Prinsessa chapter 36 . 11/10/2013
I have only 4 words to you...
"I love this story!" 3
I could stop reading even it was 1 am and had today school! I just had to read it and i'm glad i did it 'cause it was worth of it. I love Zuko x Katara pairing and loved how you build the romance between them. :)
Jaygt chapter 23 . 10/26/2013
One thing I really like about this chapter is the way Katara and Zuko act much older than they are with the resistance. One great example was when Katara thinks that Shing is so young as if she were an old veteran of the war, even though she is only 2-3 years older than him.

It is also interesting seeing Zuko's actions around the army, you did a really good job of conveying the way he has a certain air of command with your writing. I loved reading about his speeches both to the army in the previous chapter and to the prisoners in this one. They both were very good and showed the way he acted as if he were in command far longer than he had been.

Keep up the good work.
Zinelle chapter 31 . 10/4/2013
Hay,its great so far but why do you have to make Katara sound so extremaly weak all the time?
scythe's serenade chapter 36 . 9/29/2013
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE. I stayed up on a school night with classes the next day just to read this. Truly amazing. Thank you
Willowdove chapter 36 . 9/25/2013
This was an absolutely BRILLIANT story the characterization, the plot, the FEELS. I don't know about you, but I'm a sucker for the whole cuddling together at night thing. And who can forget Iroh chuckling about grandchildren? And of course there is so much more. Everything is perfect. PERFECT.
sherlock-holmes-fangirl101 chapter 36 . 9/25/2013
Okay, this is literally the most wonderful thing in the world ever. An absolute work of art as writing goes. I love the show so much and the characters just make my day. Stories like this are perfect to me, especially as yours captures the characteristics so well. You are amazing. So thanks, stranger, for one 36 chapter long heck of a ride.
Ant chapter 36 . 9/21/2013
OH MY GOD, THIS IS WONDERFUL

THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
THE PLOT
EVERYTHING

I LOVED THOS MORE THAN WIRDS CAN EXPRESS! :D
treize.khushrenada2 chapter 36 . 9/23/2013
This was soooooooooo great! Leading us through character development and trials to a sweet finish.
10ShizukaYuukiMistress10 chapter 36 . 9/11/2013
Aw, Aang, then Sokka, then GRAN-GRAN. *cries* Plz come back to fanfiction, your writing is so amazing. :')
10ShizukaYuukiMistress10 chapter 34 . 9/10/2013
I FLIPPIN LOVED IT!
10ShizukaYuukiMistress10 chapter 33 . 9/10/2013
You are a beautiful writer... all these chapters have been absoloutely fluent, and interesting, and... ohhh! ;) YOU ARE A NEW FAV AUTHOR! I had to say it. :-)
10ShizukaYuukiMistress10 chapter 32 . 9/10/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Ohhh author's like you need to return to fanfiction! :3
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