Reviews for Dangerous Ground |
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![]() ![]() It was a good story, very entertaining though I'm sad Toph wasn't there I enjoy her character, and something was bugging me throughout the story. Was Zuko's hair still shaven around his pony tail or did his hair grow out? |
![]() ![]() I love the story, but I'm curious, is Toph in this? |
![]() ![]() I think Katara is already developing feelings she don't even know about, despite her maternal nature...for a certain firebender...hehe |
![]() ![]() THAT WAS AWESOME! I read the whole series and it was AMAZING! GREAT STORY!#!# |
![]() ![]() I'm on my way to read this story AGAIN because it was simply the best Zutara story on this site. No other story has captured the personality of the characters like you have. You kept Zuko in character while allowing room for him to grow. I liked that he didnt suddenly change his views over night but didnt take forever either. ;). I love Zuko in this story and the way he became an inspiration to others in the story. And let's not forget Katara. You wrote her amazingly! She was one of my favourites characters in this story because you didn't make her whiny and I loved that she gave Zuko a chance to prove himself and the way you developed their relationship throughout the story was perfect! I liked that katara and Zuko got split up from Sokka and Aang. It was necessary for the story and Zutara would not have been possible with those two around. One of my favourite moments was when Aang ad Sokka realised Zuko was the leader of an earth bender army...priceless ! I could picture thier faces :) The last thing I'm going to say is that you are one of the few authors who has managed to successfully create an absolutely loveable OC...Teikei! I loved him soo much Well done on a brilliant story and thanks for sharing!:) Ciara :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully written epic fanfiction ! i loved all your twists and turns, and how the story flowed so beautifully.. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written, well done. Though I would love to see the next few years between them all |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Applause! This is a piece of grand and marvelous work!. And you never run out of new ideas. You ARR a gifted writer.;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this is an amazing fic for Katara and Zuko! i loved how their love started slowly and has a depth and also definitely not shallow. you're a good writer! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. There were a couple moments where the descriptions seemed a little forced or over done, but the story was wonderfully crafted and one of the best of this genre I've read. |
![]() ![]() That was the best fanfiction story I have ever read in my life. I may never read another one for I might forget this majestic story. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story so much! I read almost all of it in one night it was so good. You're a wonderful author and this was beautifully done. I was a little apprehensive when I started this, your summary sure promised a lot! However I'm happy to say it definitely lived to my expectations. I really appreciate the fact that you stayed so true to the characters. It seems that a lot of fan fiction writers change the characters till they're completely unrecognizable. Somehow you wrote them perfectly. I was able to actually imagine Sakka saying the lines or the look on Zukos face. This is only the third avatar fanfic I've read (I'm more of a Potter head, as in Harry Potter!) But it was the first novel length one. I really enjoyed it! Thank you so much for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was clever, what you did with Azula. Oh, and speaking of her, was it your intention to spell it as Zula? This was a fun and light story. I would have liked a more fleshed out plot that included Suki and Toph and a grander demise of Ozai rather than a mere Agni Kai but all in all, this was splendid! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohwow. This was awesome! I loved all of it.i would have liked it a bit better if you'd included Toph, but other than that, this was incredible to read. Some of the metaphors you came up with were so up the great work! :) |