Reviews for Dangerous Ground |
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![]() ![]() Loved your chapter you are most definitely one of the best authors on this site! Looking forward to read the rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm slow clapping (literally!) in front of my PC.. \(_)/ |
![]() ![]() I loved your chapter! It took forever but it was worth it. For the longest time I was afraid to read this fic but now that I did I am really glad. u r a great writer and I hope you will write more. I have read almost all the zutara stories that have over 100 reviews and are T. And yours is going on the list of the best |
![]() ![]() I loved reading this! My toes were curled (in the best way) the whole time i read this amazing, creative story. It is maybe the greatest thing ever! When I finished reading it i climbed out of bed and ran around my house yelling "OH MY GOSH, MY LIFE HAS JUST BEEN MADE!" (everyone is pretty mad at me... they were all sleeping...) I was so encouraged to hear that you were a christian, as I am one as well. And I was so pleased that you were able to write and interesting and gripping story with sticking to your moral values! I am so tired of writers today thinking that they need to have cussing and sex to make a story good and interesting (BTW, you have proved them very wrong!). As an aspiring writer I love to read good stuff, like what you have written here! I don't know if you are going to see this, but i just wanted you to know that your story and the passion you created was magic. Thank You |
![]() ![]() It's now 5:05am on a school night. I regret none o the sleep I lost tonight. If my grades suffer because I fall asleep in class, so be ti! This was absolutely amazing! I loved every word! All the spinning feelings that were brought up within me...thank you so much! You made an unpleasent day and enjoyable one!:) |
![]() ![]() I love this story! I read all the chapters! I just wish karats was a little stronger you know like how they show in the show...other than that it was a perfect story |
![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE this! It's perfect and wonderfully written. I wish all fics followed your formula. |
![]() ![]() I really liked this story. I was going to complain about many things, but then I realized that you wrote this fic before season 2 even came out! So I won't say anything... It is amazing that you were able to get such a large picture and prediction of an end before the 1st season had even ended. And FYI I completely agree with you: they should have broughy back the Airbenders in the actual show! Anyways these 107k words made me really happy :) P.S: ...Zula... *cries in spanish* |
![]() ![]() SOOOOOOO COOOOOOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tried with this. I really did. Your characters are barely in character and your plot is inconsistant. This is supposed to be an AU but since this picks up in the middle of things its impossible tobjudge where the characters should be developementally. Is this before or after the end of season 1? If it is before, then when? The characters would be a little weaker but not this much. If it is after, then what the fuck?! How the hell are Katara and Aang so weak?! Also, Aang doesnt do animal anything. Hes vegan. With no real tine references and completely nerfed heroes this fic is not as amazing as the description lead us to believe. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for a great story! It's also cool to know a fellow Christian wrote this :) |
![]() ![]() They should have taken Appa to the riverbank with them he could have aided them during the battle and would have defeated many of the attackers considering the number of thieves it took to subdue and secure him in the desert. These men didn't even have any ropes or chains so would have no chance of capturing or subduing the massive six legged bison and Appa has validated his fighting prowess against a shirshu. Also the flying bison could retreat and head to the local town and alert Sokka and Aang so the pair could track the kidnappers and rescue them faster. |
![]() ![]() LITERALLY THE BEST THING EVER. I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I CANT EXPLAIN HOW HAPPY AND GRATEFUL I AM FOR THIS STORY. You're a wonderful and talented write, that the plot, characters, and build of the story and spectacularly written. You had me hooked on every page, and I'm so happy I am reading this when it is completed, because if I had to have waited for each new chapter to be updated, I would've probably gone crazy. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() i hate to be that guy, but wine doesn't catch on fire haha great story tho |
![]() ![]() That was so beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to write something as wonderful as this. |