Reviews for Dangerous Ground |
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![]() ![]() Love how you reflected Christian values into this masterpiece. Zutara forever |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you wrote this fanfic a long time ago, but awesome job! Your story is what made me fall in love with the Zutara pairing and with fanfiction in general! Also, I really loved seeing how your Christian values reflected in your work! This was just a beautifully written story, so hats off to you! God Bless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was adorable. And a great Zutara fic by a fellow Christian? High five! |
![]() ![]() This is the cheeziest, cronyism, most predictable pice of crap I have ever read. And I loved every second of it ;) Great job :D But one thing: You do realize you spelled Azula's name wrong throughout the entire story, right? |
![]() ![]() Teikei is a bit of a creep :/ |
![]() ![]() Actually monks are vegetarian and therefore do not eat meat or eggs as they follow the principle of the sanctity of life so Aang wouldn't eat eggs. He always refused to eat game Sokka would bring back from hunting. |
![]() ![]() A sky bison can drive off a platypus bear and tackle a shirshu with a venomous tongue. Katara doesn't need to fear Prince Zuko as long as Appa is around. A twenty thousand pound bison with horns against a human is no competition even if the human has fire bending abilities. Appa would trample Zuko like an insect without hesitation if he attacked the group or hurl the prince backwards by blastimg aur with his tail. |
![]() ![]() Aang seems to forget he has a special whistle that produces a high pitched call only audible to animals. He should just use his whistle to summon the trusty sky bison and have him fly in to rescue the group. An animal like Appa would scatter the soldiers like leaves. An enormous six legged bison is handy in combat. He weighs twenty thousand pounds and can blast air with his tail. They often take team mascot, Momo, the flying lemurbat into towns because he looks less unusual so they could have sent the plucky lemurbat ahead to alert the bison himself. Momo has the speed and agility to move through the treetops with ease. He could get to their campsite and reach Appa far quicker than they could. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the GREATEST and MOST AMAZING Zutara fan-fic I've ever read! Very well written, especially with the progression of their relationship. You've definitely channeled their personalities superbly, and it really made me believe the love and beauty of their relationship. Excellent and truly beautiful! Hope to read more of your wonderful Zutara fan-fics. Long live Zuko and Katara! Forever Zutara 3 |
![]() ![]() You're an amazing writer. I hope that some day i see a novel out with your name on it! |
![]() ![]() That was amazing... ive never read anything so good and so spot on |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! What a story. It ended perfectly. Loved how Katara healed his scar, it was so beautiful. Also loved Iroh and Gran-Gran, hilarious! As a Christian too, your words at the end were lovely. God Bless :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is a cause for celebration! Yipppeeeee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BOOM! Now that was an ending! Azula's downfall was classic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! That was intense! |