Reviews for Dangerous Ground
legolasEstelstar chapter 9 . 12/8/2005
dear author:

i loved this chapter. i loved that scene, i dont think ive read it before, it was so sexy and inocent at the same time, just as i like it. onething though, beware of the fluff. try to keep a balance, because many people do the mistake of doing too much pathetic fluff that is ooc. you are doin great so far, and i really wish thechapters wehre so much longer, but ill read them anyways. take so much care and happy holidays!
legolasEstelstar chapter 7 . 12/8/2005
hey!~ i bet they are the earth bender rebels! wohoo!
legolasEstelstar chapter 4 . 12/8/2005
haha cool. merry christmas!
legolasEstelstar chapter 3 . 12/8/2005
interesting. i hope things spice up some more. ill keep reading. i hope aang doesnt suffers when katara and zuko fall inlove.. that would be so sad... oh and, that answer he gave her was both awesome and unexpected.. so congratulations on that
Phantom Starlight chapter 2 . 12/6/2005
"If you’ve never seen a flying bison jump let me tell you, it’s quite a sight."

Wow, that actually had me cracking up in the middle of my brother reciting his science project.

You are keeping everyone in character extrodinarily well. I have a feeling this will be another fic i end up getting confused with the real show. I'm going to finish reading this tomorrow after school, I can't wait. Big kudos to you.

"If you’ve never seen a flying bison jump..." hahaha I can't stop laughing
Chou Hime chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
Whao... what's wrong with Katara? I was thinking that she was dieing but now it's like she's on drugs! Please update soon!
QuietChallenge chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
your story is hecka awesome

keep writing!
Wrathchild chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
hehe. I love share-a-blanket fics. I'm shameless that way, and they are much more believable with zutara fics. Good job, way to motor. 8 chaps in one day? Or, had you been writing since saturday? Anyway well done.

Drivel, Out!
4ESDRAGON chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
Seems sorta like "Why the Caged Bird sings" but still rather good.

All the members of the ZFM would agree with Katara.
Monito chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
this is a cute story
StrawberryCatBeans chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
I love this story
StrawberryCatBeans chapter 3 . 12/5/2005
wow...i loved the discussion they had and how he spoke of hime
Khazia chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
M...I'm interested to see where this goes. Update soon!

Khazia*~
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