Reviews for Finish Line
ellabellaboo chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Awh! Loved it! That was so sweet, 3 and so well written! I liked that Abby's answer to Sam was sharp, considering her character, I feel it would be much more likely that she would resent Sam for what she did to Luka, rather than being all friendly, so I felt that was a huge strong-point. Well done, that was a lovely story, I especially liked the ending line. Perfection.

Ell x
Bel Vezer chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Ah! That was too perfect! I need more. You write great Luby stuff and I need some more Lubyness because of the hiatus. Please! Write more! I love your descriptions and the dialogue. They totally fit with the show. Brilliant.
Stargarian chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
aww that was great! can't wait for more!
JL chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Nice and tight, Sweet, short peice without too much cheese, and true to character. Good work!
prin69 chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
aw, thats so sweet.
Lisnaskea chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
That was fab. They way it opened with “Hey, Chief.” was perfect. Awesome job!
justawritier chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
anonymous01 chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
Really great job. You also nailed the problem with Luka and Sam's relationship on the head - he did come on too strong. Great job and I look forward to seeing more sometime from you!
striker20 chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
oh- so continue this! its so good!
Trapped in a MatchBox chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
aw i loved it! they're so adorable together! update asap!
Ginger chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
progress review- am still reading! very well written and nice.