Reviews for Changes, or how to kill a friend: Revised
richard.loveth.796 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
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angrymonkey chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
loved the story but was more than a little confused by the ending. I'm not sure if it was meat to leave questions in the readers mind or not.
Jeff chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
A very intriguing and compelling story! I like some of the explanation of the meta-physical realities between the different dimensions. The interplay between Alexander and Willow at the end is fascinating.

Here and there are some confusing sentences which can make it difficult to follow. Although your English writing skills are generally excellent, I think it would be a good idea to find a beta reader whose first language is English.