|Reviews for Broken|
| Momo20 chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
The idea that Jarod has created the story about the Centre is interesting and out of the ordinary. Before I read the last sentence after the third ending, I didn't understand the meaning of the two last possibilities because when you talk about a young who look likes Jarod, it's not clear that you're talking of Gemini.
But, I also love the idea of Jarod looking at Gemini, this could be another great ending, but it should be less confusing.
| Charro chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
the thrid ending! go with it! take it where no man or woman has gone before, okay? can't wait for the next chapter to see what you do with the story. if nothing else please continue the story for me, please...