Hi, just finished reading all currently existing chapters (1-11). Don't appologize to much for sections where there is not much action. Though action is fun, you get the details of a world in the non-action parts. And they allow the reader form a real picture of the world you discribe and to enter it. I think you have a good mixture. Keep on going, I really like the story so far.

Spelling: I think you almost allways write 'though' instead of 'through'. But I guess, I kind of got used to it ;-)

You're doing good with the grammar and tech mistakes (as far as I am capable of detecting them).

There is one point for this chapter and it is the use of one spell "mobiliarbus" (Hermione used it to move a tree) - so it is "mobili" - for movement and "arbus" (from Latin)stands for tree.

Other than that the chapter is really good. You're making them better with each turn. Good job!

As for the story - so far so good. You've got a good start and interesting ideas and I have to see how they develop. But I'll give you a judgement when it is done. It is the best way to compensate the (poor) author for his work (well this is my opinion anyway) & (I expect you to take a look at the latest chapter in my story - HP and Knight of Light).

But I can tell you that you have found an interesting approach for the continuation after HBP. Although in many fics I've found a couter curse for Avada, yours is so far the best and the most interesting. I've been also considering to introduce it but for the moment I've decided not to or it'd shift the balance.

Cheers

Very good! No one has really given Aberforth Dumbledore much thought, but I think that you are right to add him into the mix, he must have a little more to do with things than J.K. has hinted at. Now, I have to admit something. When I first started to read your story, I kind of thought it a little...bland, I guess is the word. But you have spiced it up, and now it's a really good story! You are a really good writer, and I hope that my writing can get as good as yours!

Her-My-Oh-Knee

Sam

Great make-up set, thanks for the fast service. I am sure I will buy again.

It was about bloody time you showed up again, I was getting bored. Seems everybody's decided not to update or write anymore (well at least in my list of authors).

Good chapter. Seems that on most fics, Harry is doing a great job in reconstructing his old house. An interesting touch about the village's history. Also an interesting idea about the Felix Felice potion use.

As for the horcruxes I happen to agree with you. Although I'll share a finding with you and the rest who read this.

Albania (or as it is also known as the Land of Eagles) where one of the most interesting legends, speaks of a boy that found the nest of a Great Eagle who came in, after hunt, with a snake in his beak and left it ot its baby to consume and eat but the sibbling did not get the chance as the snake was still alive. So the boy killed the snake and took the sibbling eagle as prize for his efforts. But the Great eagle offered the boy his help in providing his sight (eyes) and strength to his needs, and later the boy became a great hero accross the land and proclaimed the Eagle boy, and thus was given the name of the country - the Land of Eagles.

Why do I share this well I tell you - because if you remember the crest of Ravenclaw is an Eagle (not a raven as it was made in the movies). I doubt Rowling choose it without any reason. Also Voldemort fled straight to an Albanian forest (and as some fics suggest that is the place where he made the last horcrux before going after the Potters), which is full of SNAKES. There's got to be a relation. I haven't found it yet but I'm sure there might be one.

Well, anyway, waiting for the next chapter. (while trying to figure out the Rowling mysteries).

Terrific story, congrats on all the reviews, wish I could have had that many at chapter 7. Love the long chapters, I like longer ones. Great story, update soon!

oh Please, come on, can you put another chapter already? I?m desperated, I need to know what it's coming, by the way, great chapter! but keep going, update ASAP

OMG! PLEASE update soon!

I can tell you my friend, as long as you give enough information doesn't matter the size of the chapter, I can tell you and you know what? this chapter was amazing, please keep going, I don't want to see me on the last chapter and alone with that kind of spectation so keep writeing everyone it's getting a bit exiting about this fit, if you take to mush time to publish we can kill you! so do it faster!

Good job. Really good.

Axerton,

Haha, great chapter mate. This chapter really is quite long. Hope to be seeing the next chapter soon. Hope holidays is giving you a much deserved and needed break!

Shealtiel, your Beta.

Interesting chapter. The St. Mungo's thing was done pretty well, if I might add. You might want to ask around for a beta, they help you catch any annoying mistakes.

Hehe...I recognized all those quotes, but that might also be because I just reread the entire series a couple weeks ago. Well, good work and I'm on to the next chapter. (Bow to death, Harry - has to be one of my favorite quotes next to Tonks asking who Moody knew that had blown off their buttocks...lol...anyway, I'm off to the next chappie!)

Wow, great story and I'm looking forward to reading it all. The Homorfus Charm idea was simply amazing since you kept it realistic and to the point. I always had an idea it would be complex, but I could never word it right..lol..Good job!

I like the story. I already told you your twist with Aunt Petunia is not plausible in an earlier review. Umbridge putting Percy under the Imperius Curse, though, is a plausible twist: after all, she did set dementors on Harry.

After looking at your profile, I'm going to guess you're F.