Reviews for Twelve Days Before Christmas
Sci-Fi Raptor chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
Ah... you clever litte phanny, you...
Malcolm Yuy chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
Man, that was a good chapter. I thought Naru would be more strict about Keitaro sleeping with her...you know...I just think it's funny that you now have gotten Haitani and Shirai in the game. I can't wait to see what happens next...

So, please continue this fic! It has the Love Hina feel to it. Later!
Bluezone777 chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
good job for your first Love Hina fic. hope you update this one soon. nothing I can see wrong here grammer wise so keep going.

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Sci-Fi Raptor chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
Typically you would use Joe and Jane, but what do I know?

Its great to finally see a non-Naru bash fic after so long. All the others got boring...

Great start, and the characters are all very much in character, which is a remarkable plus. Your grammer was fine, since nothing really jumped out. We'll see how plot goes, though I'm sure much hilarity will ensue. If you popped out a chapter every one or two days or so, it would be a pretty cool that you paralleled reality. It would also give you a motive to not sit down and write nothing for months like I have been...

Cheers, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Malcolm Yuy chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
This is going to be a continuation, right? I can't imagine what Keitaro's going to do with Jody around. I think it'll be hiliarious...

I've always preferred the manga over the anime, so I know what you're talking about...

Anyways, keep writing, and update when you can. Later!