Reviews for Wanting
DerangedxandxSarcastic chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
'How far would David go? That’s not the real question, David realizes. He wants to know when he would ever stop.' that is one of the best ending sentences I have ever heard.

The Cheshire Katt chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Wow, that sounds like something David would say. Ever feel like we got jipped a book?
Nameless chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Woah. I can't critique this one at all. I love this David.
Harikari chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
This was great! Good job. Thanks so much for sharing! :)
Eded chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Poor bastard. And this is David, in a nutshell. Just as disturbing and beautiful as he should be.
hionlife chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
I love me some David angst. haha. "the rust cake of blood" excellent. Sometimes, the oddest words can create the best imagery and you do that oh so very well. Danke.